Webnovel Author: DartLove - Fanfic Collection

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I don't edit because I don't want to, but because I can't. I am not a native English speaker, and I know it very mediocre (even worse) and I can not understand what exactly my readers do not understand, because I do not see a specific problem, and it is not me such a lazy ass who is too lazy to do a rare thing, but the language barrier. So hold on until I learn English, or beta will not descend into my mortal fick... *)

Without hesitation, I hand myself a five*! I will briefly describe the essence of the work on the shelves. - Here you will not see the typical story of a popadanets with overcoming, finding the meaning of life, creating a harem or creating a family. Here the focus will be on trolling others, increasing the personal strength of the MK and collecting buns, as well as getting rid of the control that made the MK popadantsem. A little about the lady here you will not see the usual value of life and the constant self-restraint of human morality or the fear of murder. For MK, human lives are worth just as much as he can get energy from them. Here you will not see the personal growth of the main character, he is already an established person, but small changes will still be, for example, respect for others and justified arrogance are closely intertwined with caution and highly developed paranoia. The main character can be described in three words: cynic, egoist and Troll. Now a bit of criticism. The world around the hero is poorly spelled out, but it is quite tolerable. The characters surrounding the hero are given just as much attention as they will occupy a place in the life of the hero, and their character, type of thoughts and style of speech of Beaulieu or menie corresponds to the Canon. There is very little water at work. I don't describe how every part of the interior is loved in Chinese works, and rather focus on the actions themselves rather than describing the environment, but describing the environment is enough to understand what is actually happening. Poorly described fights and little action. Personally, I believe that fights are not long, so I don't describe them in too much detail, or make them almost instantaneous, or just keep the description to a minimum. Someone may think that this is a minus, someone who does not like to spend time reading water is a plus. There is no romance, and if there is, it is minimal, and it is rather licimeria on the part of the MS, when he needs to get something from a certain female person. There is no such thing as friendship here, as I said G. G. is cynical and paranoid. Excessive cruelty of the main character. He's not a villain, as you might think, but just plays the part because he likes it, but he doesn't do anything for nothing, and if cutting out the world doesn't give him anything, he won't do anything. Therefore, it is with saving the world. He can easily try on a blue swimsuit with the y sign on the chest, if this action will do him enough good. To some of the above things MK has not yet reached, so we can consider it spoilers *) just stating the fact, MK adheres to the Canon until it breaks it with its actions to hell, this is not a minus and not a plus, because if I scored on the Canon of history, I would just write the original. In the story, there is no provozovani from characters appearing out of nowhere and chthonic. My real rating is something between three* and four* because it would not hurt to pay more attention to the background characters and cover world events in more detail rather than stating them as a fact. However, the main disadvantage of the work is my grammar and spelling, which even makes me **** up from time to time.