Up to Chapter 8 so far. For this site the writing style and grammar is excellent, though please try to learn some more descriptive words. If I have to keep seeing the word talent I'm going to flip. Please capitalise the levels and realms of cultivation and martial arts, helps the story flow better and gives us and understanding of what's what. Overall so far it's a decent story that looks like it might be a good one to keep up with. Still new so no comments on update speed. Good job Author
Eastern · LMoodie
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Webnovel
Up to Chapter 8 so far. For this site the writing style and grammar is excellent, though please try to learn some more descriptive words. If I have to keep seeing the word talent I'm going to flip. Please capitalise the levels and realms of cultivation and martial arts, helps the story flow better and gives us and understanding of what's what. Overall so far it's a decent story that looks like it might be a good one to keep up with. Still new so no comments on update speed. Good job Author
The First Forefather
Eastern · LMoodie