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well, she didn't expect things to be so complicated. was to buy some items and leave the town
ch 111 Panicked Sheep
Fantasy · LamenThief
it does, but in the right time
"We can't attack people just because they're drunk in a pub," he explains. "The Carpenters knew these laws when they created this tavern, so they have to be hospitable and kind to all customers, no matter their appearance."
Fantasy · LamenThief
Also, I said he was an assassin specialized in "blades", which includes a sword, but of course, he preferred daggers... you can't read properly and probably have mental problems, get away man, needs a brain to read novels and understand them
ch 0 5 Boosted
Fantasy · LamenThief
no, he uses puppies to kill
ch 0 5 Boosted
Fantasy · LamenThief
To avoid suspicion, Arthur also approaches the girl named Margaret. She could certainly be considered a young beauty with great potential in Liam's world, so showing some interest in her is not difficult at all.
Fantasy · LamenThief
what an honorable gentleman... I understand your side, but my previous answer continues, I will not make Aria omnipotent, so it is your choice to continue reading or not, knowing what to expect in the future
"His organs are shutting down…" Aria continues attempting to heal him with her magic, but she can't find the real problem. "Without knowing what his issue is, I can't solve it."
Fantasy · LamenThief
if you use bad words to reply, WB bot deletes the message and I just see it as "message deleted," just let me know if you have something to say like "I'm dropping the novel and will leave you in peace"
"His organs are shutting down…" Aria continues attempting to heal him with her magic, but she can't find the real problem. "Without knowing what his issue is, I can't solve it."
Fantasy · LamenThief
what does people's cultivation level have to do with recognizing poisons inside people's bodies in a second without using any scientific method? Also, I hate irrational readers like you, so if you drop the novel, we'll both have our problems solved, right?
"I know," Aria holds Josephine firmly. "But I can't see any common poison or magic on him; whatever it is, it's well hidden."
Fantasy · LamenThief
Is she dumb because she can't see an invisible poison at first glance in a second? ok, you can leave now
"His organs are shutting down…" Aria continues attempting to heal him with her magic, but she can't find the real problem. "Without knowing what his issue is, I can't solve it."
Fantasy · LamenThief
stop what??????,,??????,,,?,?
Arthur enjoys Margaret's company; she can't compete with Aria and Nyx in beauty, but she is bold and confident without seeming vulgar, which makes her attractive.
Fantasy · LamenThief
not that one yet lol
Panicked Sheep
Fantasy · LamenThief
I get you. but this story is not about the father, and not all characters are made to be loved by readers
ch 11 Life is Precious
Fantasy · LamenThief
ok, not wanting enter every hole appears in front of him is being a simp, really, makes a "LOT" of sense coming from a virgin
"Oh, you care about her honor and purity?" Draven respects Arthur even more for that. "You keep surpassing me in every way. I couldn't have resisted the advances of a girl like that at your age."
Fantasy · LamenThief
no need such things bro, MC knows what he does, and he's not like his father. just read the story, the start acting as an assassin again soon and just kill everyone in his path
The two pick up the third member of the trio and run as fast as they can without looking back.
Fantasy · LamenThief
I had no way of knowing since the scene really was "weird," so I wouldn't blame anyone for a negative reaction
The metallic taste of blood on his lips is strange, but neither can it overcome the aphrodisiac taste of his saliva, and his smell invades her nose, making the kiss just wonderful, a bloody kiss.
Fantasy · LamenThief
also, for a "certified writer and bookworm," your review lacks so much, it just don't make sense at all, can you make a descent review or I I delete this $h!t?
Reincarnated in the Astral World
Fantasy · LamenThief