Struggle. Struggle and live on.
The writing structure is enjoyable, and the narration is written as if the character is speaking to you. Interesting concept. [img=recommend]
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Why is it called Hogo-sha?
Thank you for your review. It wasn't my intention to write a funny character, but I guess that's the side-effect of writing a petty main character. [img=recommend]
Fantasy · JeffyK
There's a lot of effort placed into the worldbuilding and action of the story, but word structure requires editing. It's an enjoyable sci-fi, nonetheless. The dialogue can get confusing, but so long as it gets polished, it will be great.
Sci-fi · Ark_Seikatsu
I like the combat so far, and although monster stories are not my forte, I can see some potential. Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fantasy · Month
Pretty alright. Needs to use less caps, however. War is at hand, though. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fantasy · The_Swimming_Moon
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
The writing structure is enjoyable, and the narration is written as if the character is speaking to you. Interesting concept. [img=recommend]