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Why did you take this story down and now all the chapters where he takes over the shaker principality is not even published yet smh. I’m kind of disappointed because I read every chapter as they were released and was really into the story

You skipped a lot then started changing names and just generally after chapter 200 it starts to suck because of you skipping so much

I’ just wonderi why you keep making it seem like your skipping around a book

Same bs as the last chapter come on now give some effort instead of copy and paste just to release a chapter

Quit copying half the last chapter just to fill the chapter with bs

Great story but I wish you would keep the release a little more constant but as a fellow author I know it can get hectic

This story is starting to become trash and here’s three things that don’t make sense firstly why put your pride over helping Ryu when that’s literally your only purpose and you even said so yourself then did the opposite secondly why not tell Ryu to break thru in the crystal from jump thirdly it seems like your purposely making it turn into a novel that moves around Ryu’s feelings and not cultivation

Trash is all i can say like you had me hooked until i realized this should happen in five huNdred chapters not a short story

I like the story but is jing lan ever gonna stop being a coward or What

I Feel likE mingyu made her choice for her family over long chen because she knows if he gets angry he will wipe the empire out so it could be the last we see of her

Cant seem to load any of the new chapters