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Lucifer's cult seems like a good idea just with a little grooming from the real Lord Lucifer.

I really wish Michael would find a way to subdue Lailah and make her work for him plus try to become allies with victor it would be very good.

Why's the novel written in the first person place?, its makes it sound more like a narrative than a novel. Just my thought.

Nahh he shouldn't destroy them but find a way to get them instead ,I would love for him and Gaya to absolve it and then have a good banging!.

Why is the novel written in the first person? Makes it sounds more like a narrative than a novel.

Just keep the fantasy going for now, and the futuristic stuff at bay at least for the moment.

Honestly, its sad, his worked hard endure enough pain and suffering just to see his mother out safely, now you took the only price out of his hand, sadly I had not expect this to turn out to a story filled with blind revenge and pointless killing, what would happened after the belvan family has all be killed? Then he'll just kill more people for power? Well the story is interested but a bit tasteless.

Well personally I feel this novel is more of a ripe off compare to My Dragon System which has an original feel to it, but since its practically the same author its given. One thing I do enjoy in most novel is the slow building of the MC's abilities, the urge and will to get stronger like in so many other novels (one of the things I enjoyed in My Dragon System), even if peter is not the MC he is till in the lime light and his personality of accepting the fact to be a bottom feeder is a huge turn off for me, if you get bullied you'll only wanna get stronger to have revenge or stop being bullied, not just accepting the fact and constantly betraying those who are looking out for you... Oh well its just a novel and my thoughts.