The story was very well written, side characters were explored and main characters were well defined, and the theory behind the magic was incredibly well thought out. However, the latter part of the story's plot fell off and felt too convenient, felt absurdly rushed, and ended in, while in a heartwarming and predictable event, felt it left too many loose ends and plots unresolved. I would advise the author revisit this story at a later time and rewrite the end, as the climax has yet to happen.
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The story was very well written, side characters were explored and main characters were well defined, and the theory behind the magic was incredibly well thought out. However, the latter part of the story's plot fell off and felt too convenient, felt absurdly rushed, and ended in, while in a heartwarming and predictable event, felt it left too many loose ends and plots unresolved. I would advise the author revisit this story at a later time and rewrite the end, as the climax has yet to happen.
Mages Are Too OP
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