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got to say the intro chapters are painful and aren't good at all in my opinion. read to chapter 17 which is where i dropped it. the mc doesnt come off as smart which the story wants you to belive he is which is only supported by random info dumps the mc provides. but at the same time he knows nothing at all about the world he lives in which i would expect a normal 13 year old to know let alone someone who has been reincarnated and is suposedly super smart now since they had a second hyper learning period. top that off with basic logic/world building mistakes like thinking muscle memory carries over between reincarnations and deciding to make healing potions some scented candle because the author thinks it would apply faster then drinking (and comparing the effectiveness to nano bots which is a disgrace to nano bots and technology) it and leaves less impurities that way. not like cigarettes and vape build up residue in the lungs so why wouldn't this potion do the same. (we all know it is just to be different and not follow tropes but it is justified so poorly)first time i have been put off by a story so much before the paid chapters start. no idea how this only has like 4 reviews that arent 4-5 stars especially with people complaining in paragraph comments.

somewhat decent fap material but it gets too crazy too fast to the point where you dont just need suspention of disbelief but an entire suspention bridge to think that the plot development is reasonable. dropped at chp 32 since mc was acting like a sadomasochist and was inflicting pain opon his partner which is his mom(yay incest /s) and was enjoying her scream in pain. would avoid/10.

this is a bad story by all measures (only read up to chapter 9 (there is only so much i can take of this story even if it is funny to read take) this review with a entire pack of saltine crackers) 1. rascisim (chinese patriotisim) 2. complete and total lack of how humans cope with being alone 3. stupid mc 4. stupid everyone 5. no progression 6. no character development 7. no worldbuilding 8. no stakes 9. generic this is a only good read because of user comments pointing out the flawed story aka one of those so reads bad it is funny

i give this a perfect 5 stars. the story is great should have made a review earlier. this is a breath of fresh air for me and it was worth reading almost entirely for the fact it has an important story outside of the game. it doesn't focus entirely on the game only to have a chapter once in a blue moon which is almost entirely just filler to break up the pace and stop the mc from getting too op. and for the cherry on top of that, the author takes his time and invests time and sanity into making sure the world is consistant. it is to the point of having multiple excel documents to keep track of money etc. can't wait to see what the author plans to do with the corruption the mc has caused and the gods of the world.

this is a good book so far can't wait to see who is added to the mc's familia. great quality writing compared to others on here that don't close their quotes properly. also the poster actually does research into how people would react in the original story. have great expectations for this book