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*West -> east

"I figured… I'll gather my remaining men and I want some tank crews with us and we will begin pushing west toward Algeria," I say while showing him my planned movements on the map laid out on the table in the command area. 

Wolverine in The Boys

Wolverine in The Boys

TV · Anomander_Adaar

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she knew* ?

When he waded back into consciousness she was relieved, even ecstatic but when she came to see him, when she saw the look in his eyes she it was the end.

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

TV · freedomfic

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*don't want

"Plus I don't to break the machine." Homelander finished as they all felt a distinct burning smell caused by metal rubbing on metal.

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

TV · freedomfic

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I know many of you are accustomed to fanfics where the protagonists become overpowered within 10 chapters and start killing everyone and collecting girls, but this fanfic won't be like that, I hope you understand. This won't be the kind of fanfic that has a timeskip every few dozen chapters.

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Anime & Comics · Fumiaki

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*here -> hero

"Hmh, see now usually I'm a sucker for a revenge plot and considering you were my here growing up I'm even inclined to help you but there is just a small problem."

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander

TV · freedomfic

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When Dio was about a meter away from Jinx, she finally took initiative and fired an eldritch explosion in his direction.

DC: The Prince of the Underworld

DC: The Prince of the Underworld

Anime & Comics · Abyssuit

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I would advise the use of "queue" it's less vulgar for the same meaning, i believe it would fit better in Fleur's mouth ...

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"And did these changes include you becoming wider at the shoulders, a more toned body with thicker thighs, an amazing ass, higher cheekbones, sharper facial features, a little stronger jaw, more attractive nose, and a bigger la bitte?" Fleur asked me with a broad smile at the ending.

Ron weasley : The lion

Ron weasley : The lion

Movies · DR_ELFWAL

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"... What of my son ..."

"And? What if my wayward son and his new-found ally, this mortal you speak of...?" Belial asked as he turned his attention to the kneeling fiend. "Where are they now...?" He added with a thoughtful expression.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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i'm not a native speaker but i believe you want to say "their whole body"

Thoughts raced, and the dark figure had identified the uninvited guest. A kind of panic that swept through the whole body.

Arcane - Building Mechs in Piltover

Arcane - Building Mechs in Piltover

Video Games · Fisher_0840

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the 1st Bella -> him

Jacob stared at Ethan with an annoyed look on his face; he seemed to be jealous of Bella. Ethan didn't feel anything for Bella, and he knew she didn't feel anything for him either, but he didn't mind resting his head on her head as he looked at Jacob, just to spite him.

Twilight: Son of Hades

Twilight: Son of Hades

Movies · Toruu

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Flipping through the channels on the television, he found a series playing. It was called 'Everybody Hates Chris'. It looked like a simple comedy show that would keep him entertained for the next few hours. Ethan opened the snacks and drink and rested.

Twilight: Son of Hades

Twilight: Son of Hades

Movies · Toruu

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"so we are going out to eat" i think would be more correct, i'm not a native speaker so i'm not sure.

"Oh, I'm going out with my family today. My brother is going back from his trip today, so let's go out to eat." She replied, hurrying up.

Twilight: Son of Hades

Twilight: Son of Hades

Movies · Toruu

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i don't understand the question, "are they Brave" ??

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Twilight: Son of Hades

Twilight: Son of Hades

Movies · Toruu

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