Raven_Bailone - Profile

If you're looking for a chill, carefree, somewhat OP MC, then this story is for you! It has multiversal travel, magic, and a quirky/ somewhat eccentric MC who does what he wants. So far it seems like there will be a single love interest (currently unknown). There are slight grammar mistakes and maybe some awkward sentence structure that interrupts the flow of the story and writing slightly. Regardless the overall story so far is great and I can't wait to read more chapters.

Omg can't believe I've seen this so late! I love the MC! I love the story progress! And I just adore the pairing! If you like action, yaoi, romance, and naruto, this fanfic is for you. But seriously this is a well-constructed story, the story pace is slightly fast but still easy to follow along. More importantly, I love how you've sprinkled little romantic moments rather than fully focusing on them, the slow pace and genuine exploration of their relationship are wholesome and adorable. I further adore the way you integrate the elements of family, romance, and action nicely, and everything flows and isn't disconnected or forced. Honestly, hope you continue to write this story/Fanfic.

Great start! Can't wait for more chapters! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Omg so amazing can’t wait for it to update!!! This story is one of the best multiverse Fanfic stories I’ve Ever read It has a fantastic storyline and development. This stroy Provided an interesting take on the op mc multiverse Genre and does oncrediblt well to maintain the balance between action, comedy and slice of lofe elements. Furthermore, it creates an interesting and satisfying end/reslove to each arc/universe. Honestly cant find enough words to praise this story and its develpoment!! Author san continue doing such a great job!

Idk how you could “bash” naruto in the sense that he suffered the most incomparison to majority of the other characters. I mean sure he didnt use a lot of jutsus but he used what he had particularly well. it isnt necessarily about how much talent Or power you have but what you do with it. But above all else nArutos character depIcted the essence of determination, perservernce and Compassion.

I really enjoyed this fanfic! It has magic! Magical beasts! Pokémon! What more could you ask for! If your looking for an op mc, multiverse traveler, Tamer and pet collector, then this Is the fanfic for you. Hopefully the author updates soon! Can’t wait to see were this story goes!