DHillion

8d

Replied to Calm_Mountains

totally

ch 215 Remnants of a bygone past. Part-1.

Reborn as an Extra

Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains

DHillion

8d

Commented

I'd go with swordsman

ch 215 Remnants of a bygone past. Part-1.

Reborn as an Extra

Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains

DHillion

1mth

Commented

less info dumps and a bit more about him getting stronger and the story progressing. I like the doppelganger idea, just hope they don't come up very much in the story. They'd be good for fillers.

ch 16 Jar of nothingness (3)

Transmigrated into a Gamified Realm: Author's Journey In New Reality

Fantasy · Lazy_Pen_Master

DHillion

5mth

Commented

Always good keep it up

ch 1300 Partaking in the Exile Recruitment

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

DHillion

6mth

Posted

An interesting 🤔 concept. I like the character build and how he isn't the MC type that continually sings his own praises. I do hope to see his self heal skill evolve further.

I Have Infinite Skill Points

Eastern · East City Order

DHillion

6mth

Commented

I like it so far. Kinda thought that the 7 day period would have ended by chapter 20.

ch 25 Mass Mutation

Super Gene Hunting Ground

Eastern · Bing Ji Ge

DHillion

7mth

Commented

This chapter was structured better than the previous chapters.

ch 55 Chapter 55 "The Battle's Turning Tide"

Awakening Internal Energy and Mana

Fantasy · workformhome

DHillion

7mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

ch 55 Chapter 55 "The Battle's Turning Tide"

Awakening Internal Energy and Mana

Fantasy · workformhome

DHillion

7mth

Commented

Need to distinguish between inner monologue and non-inner monologue.

ch 0 1 chapter 1 a world full of magic and demons

Awakening Internal Energy and Mana

Fantasy · workformhome

DHillion

8mth

Commented

It's even better than before. I do wish for more scenes with his mother. Her character attitude is on par with the Emperor's.

ch 165 Chapter 165:First Ordeal

Surviving As An Extra In Fantasy World Isn't Easy

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

DHillion

9mth

Commented

Get to feeling better soon

ch 279 Chapter 279

Realizer of Death : The Reaper

Fantasy · Nzr150cc

DHillion

9mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 172 Changes

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

DHillion

9mth

Posted

A good start. Hopefully he doesn't get too much in the way of skills and equipment in the beginning. If the growth of his strength grows steadily and doesn't just shoot up. then the story will continue to have a stable plot.

I'm at Level 30, But I Can Slay Level-9999 Beasts in One Hit!

Urban · Red Wine Falls In Love With Flowers

DHillion

9mth

Commented

These subtle insights on those from Arcadia make me wish for his venture to Arcadia that much more.

ch 257 Chapter 257

Realizer of Death : The Reaper

Fantasy · Nzr150cc

DHillion

10mth

Commented

where did this Marcus come from

ch 106 Company

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

DHillion

10mth

Posted

This story has a lot of potential and I hope to see a bit more positive things happening from here on after all the loss mc has suffered. Also hope to see gradual build up to his revenge.