Badges 11
Moments 120
3500*4=14000, so where did 12,400 come from?
Goblin Gourmand was 4 Levels above you, so you gained its usual experience of 3500, x1 per Level above you. Therefore, you gained 12,400 experience x80% for the last blow and put in a majority of the effort.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
So manual fans aren't real?
"Go away. You are not a real fan…"
Mages Are Too OP
Games · Soaring Flames
I only realized that wasn't the name when I read your comment.
The handsome young man was named Schuck. They were best buddies and neighbors and had been in the same school from elementary school to college. They were not brothers but closer than brothers. So, they were most direct with each other.
Mages Are Too OP
Games · Soaring Flames
It's fine. Definitely the cleanest thing I've read on here.
The rest of the Berserk Goblins finally fell started settling down. Their skin turned from red to a very pale and sickly green. Swords fell to the ground as the creatures collapsed.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
"Fell" in the first sentence seems unnecessary.
The rest of the Berserk Goblins finally fell started settling down. Their skin turned from red to a very pale and sickly green. Swords fell to the ground as the creatures collapsed.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
Is "get" supposed to be a different word or does "get" mean something in modern slang that would make this make sense?
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Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
I thought they'd be Stargate fans from the forearm clasp.
Geth couldn't help but laugh at him. They had both been Doctor Who fans for years. "Trust me, it could be worse." He thought back to the names he'd seen in the Ranking lists. "I'm going by Geth now. If you don't mind, I'm going to call you TiL for short, it would feel awkward otherwise."
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
Thanks. I figured that after reading a bit more.
'There should still be another 5 miles or so of these woods, and the number of Goblin patrols I've run into have increased.' He wasn't complaining, it was easy experience and he'd already Leveled up once. It did make him worried for his mom and sisters though, but her husband was quite capable so he shouldn't worry.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
Whose husband? There are at least 3 females mentioned here, but if it was his mom's he'd probably refer to him as his dad, right?
'There should still be another 5 miles or so of these woods, and the number of Goblin patrols I've run into have increased.' He wasn't complaining, it was easy experience and he'd already Leveled up once. It did make him worried for his mom and sisters though, but her husband was quite capable so he shouldn't worry.
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr
Casting a heightened shinning lance, Marcus pointed his body towards the shadow trident in front of him and descended upon it like a missile.
Transmigrated as a Ghost
Fantasy · MegaC
If the writer actually put any thought into it, he could have figured a regular occurrence didn't need mentioning.
Soon their hour and a half break was over and Marcus' group of one monster, one beast, and one human moved out continuing their journey.
Transmigrated as a Ghost
Fantasy · MegaC
She was right the first time.
She cut her own words as her gaze fell on the open profile and then back at him. "Oh! What a clever nickname! This person must be a godlike player!"
Avatar Online
Games · Piokilek
Both times "and I" is used in this paragraph should be "and me".
After that, Core and his subordinate helped Emria and I escape and took us to a man named Voron Xilris, Saphrilla's dad. That was when Orthlys declared war against Econica, painting Core's subordinate and I as the perpetrators behind the attack, claiming that we were Econican spies because I was using an Econican army sword.
Inverse System
Fantasy · Wizzez
Who is Mr Baker?
Marcus took out the shovel he had obtained and started to hit the creature repeatedly in order to get it to let go. However, the more he hit it the harder it bit until after multiple hits from the shovel it eventually stopped moving. What Marcus did not know was that if not for his blessing of iron the creature definitely would have been able to bite his leg off.
Transmigrated as a Ghost
Fantasy · MegaC
He felt that he could take in another cucumber.
Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
Eastern · Oof
No, "passed" is a verb.
Quinn seemed to be learning so much, it just proved that the information that was revelled to originals compared to the rest was different. This also further confirmed that Quinn being a Vampire, wasn't an ability. The number on his watch had never changed, or maybe it was the fact that his cells were no longer human.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Are the dorms mixed?
"I'm not sure, but he was kinda hot."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Why is this a question?
"Hey, you can't just ask something like that?" Del whispered.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Does his "katana blade" have a hilt, or is he cutting himself every time he uses it?
While Fay would use her longsword, Leo would use his katana blade. Not even giving the rats a chance to live.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
"Filthy and I" should be "Filthy and me".
"Alise will follow behind Filthy and I. Filthy, your goal is to pick off the two guys casting spells. Alise, assist with this as best you can, your Thief class and knife throwing Skills will help there. I will be responsible for the two up close to the Boss."
Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Ullyr