Man, those four chapters were hard to read. Lots of repetition of words and information, like, I counted about 4 'as' in one short sentence. Constantly mentioning "the future adventure in the multiverse" is also annoying, you got the message across the first few times, you don't need to repeat it 4 times per chapter. I'll keep reading a little more because I know it's hard to write at first, but try to take a look at these first chapters and make them less difficult.
Thanks for the cinema, sr absolute
The bodyguard let her meet alone with the boy she was selling to afo?
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The text is repeated
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The dialogues are all messed up and the grammar is dead, but the story is interesting
We are getting two chapters in the month before GTA 6
Please do away with multiple POVs for the same thing. The story hasn't progressed in about 5 chapters.
5 chapters and nothing happened, goodbye
Shouldn't the starting stats be 0 regardless of how strong or how much experience the person had before receiving the blessing?
From Overlord To Multiverse.
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