Chance_Findler - Profile

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Are you the author that posted this on QQ?

is this only for pack or group animals like wolves and baboons?

He is like a beta harem protagonist that does not know how to act around women.

Pretty good if I do say so myself. The only criticism I have is not explaining who the characters are. I literally know not a single one that he got but other than that I understand and enjoyed the story.

there was but most of it was just the mc stomping of the people that he doesn't like

The story is good but a lot of plot holes. This can be fixed with time but I rather the story be finished then you could rewrite it for more correction and to allow the story to flow more easily. So over all good story but can be better at a later date as this is still relatively short and new.

Everything is written in a amazing way but the MC is one of the best characters I have read about. He is not some child that was experimented on and was "broken" or was he a talented person that found life "boring" and god forbid if he was teenager that never lost there virginity and only thinks with there PP. Over all the story has promise and will turn out great if you continue to do what you are doing.

Love it, but I forgot if this is the story that the main character won't kill no matter what because "all life is precious"? expexpexpexp

The novel is great but its probably dropped because if you look at the other things this person wrote they write amazing novels but drop is out of no where. So dont get you Hope's up on this continuing.

This is a good novel but it have quite alot of Chinese idioms and ideology. Lastly Hela seems to be portrayed in a more light manner than in other novels. Instead of someone who killed possibly billion she is like a dangerous house wife with ambition. All in all you should read it but if you don't like it after chapter 60-80 then it's not for you as the story picks up around there.

Not enough overall design. He is going from one place to another at a flip of a dime, plus things are going super fast as in way too fast for the story. You could have extended the chapters by adding discription for what he will do and why instead of it being on a whim. Overall the story has a chance to be amazing but it just needs a lot of work.

The start is good and how he dies is different but a nice change to other books. The character has a nice personality and overall is a great MC for this kind of book. Overall the book is pretty much perfect besides some small things here and there you can go back to and fix in the future. An amazing book that does not have many equal to it.

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A really good one but sadly it's taking long to update. skrjsjrjerjfjfjrjejfj2jwjfjj3jjtrjejwjejrjrj3rjrjejejjfdjrjrjrjfjrjeje