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Love.the.chapter but what is gouging on with look like the rough draft being in closed its confusing me as to what tis going on

Also what about tech gifted to humans like asgard beaming tech from stargate. Or tech reversed engineered like the crystal computers from the gould

What about tech from the star gate tv series? Some of the the advanced races were human like the tollans. You could even call the ancients human too since technically they are a precusere to the modern humans and even Inter breed ed with them.

Natasha cause the others come with tom much baggage and the baggage Natasha comes with can be dealt with money and upgrades

have you considered that this could easily turn into harry causing the system apocalypse 😕

Doctor who quote for the win with the trap speech at the end

Sound to me that harry remade the colt from the tv show supernatural. Too cool next up a lightsaber

On was there some kind of time skip that I missed. One moment there are training the new member next it s the fight with the 7swordsman and cut with no explanation what did I miss?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

loving the story as well as your other keep up the good work

loving the effort you a doing keep up the good work

love the story but the bad grammer will jar me out of the story flow at times. have you thought of using gramercy to try and fix it? other than that it is a well thought out and written story

Loving the story keep up the good work