Whenever Noah see the status screen without a reason I always skip those. I mean , nothing substancial changed since the last time he checked. I feel like a teacher reading a student essay where they add useless shit just to increase the word count
ch 135 135 - Albino Holes
Fantasy · Zhanye
Gj! Ty for the chapter
ch 80 80 - Almost Reaching
Fantasy · Zhanye
I hope that Noah get an Aston Martin
ch 74 74 - Big Evolution
Fantasy · Zhanye
Good chapter . I think you can speed up the pace a little bit. I mean 62 chapters for 4 days only is kinda slow. I know that a lot of things happened and you wanted to detail all of them but I am sure you can condense some of this
ch 62 62 - Hisss
Fantasy · Zhanye
As long as you keep the quality I'm down to read more chapters!
ch 60 60 - Why They Are Angry
Fantasy · Zhanye
Lilith is gonna be an amazing support for sure
ch 54 54 - Name
Fantasy · Zhanye
"Unranked to challanger only PIG how long will it take?!" Good chapter btw!
ch 46 46 - PigMan
Fantasy · Zhanye
Isn't this the 2nd time he meets her? I mean, it's not like she hurt his feelings or anything. And being humble enough to give an apology like she did i would say that is more than enough to forgive the past issues
ch 42 42 - Apologize
Fantasy · Zhanye
First time I see an Mc that has this concern about using main hand
Holding a dagger in each hand would hinder Noah more than it would help, since he was right-handed, not ambidextrous. He was unable to use a dagger in each hand independently; his left hand would be much more dangerous if he only used it to control [Hell Flames].
Fantasy · Zhanye
He can just explain them on the first time they Appear and then use a shorter description.
ch 38 38 - Thief Who Steals from Thieves
Fantasy · Zhanye
Thanks for the chapter! Just a little suggestion :when you are writing the stats sheet you don't need to write the whole description of the skill everytime
ch 38 38 - Thief Who Steals from Thieves
Fantasy · Zhanye
Thanks for the shorter status window
ch 136 136 - What could possibly go wrong?
Lucifer's Descendant System
Fantasy · Zhanye