Equalling_Heaven

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Yup this might be a bit excessive... Spam of 1 star review will surely fall from the skies hahahahaha

There was suppose to be a whole arc about how Sumire's past was supposed to be revealed. The men whom she used to sell her body to had videos of them gangbanging her and threaten Yuito to give them money or they will release said footage.

A life with the Author

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Equalling_Heaven

2mth

Commented

Storytelling wise, this might be interesting. I wonder how the mc will take this information. I think this will be a good anchor for more self development. We already witness his growth physically but there's not much growth mentally and emotionally after the tsukimi incident.

3. Sumire was suppose to be an ex hoe who was trained since young to the ways of sex. Like those highschool girls trained by their stepfather or uncle.

A life with the Author

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Equalling_Heaven

2mth

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Doesn't matter whether they end up together or not. Just give her a chance to redeem herself. Yuito is already aware of what she's thinking when that happens because of the author, so he should know she didn't want that to happen. Plus what he did to marin when he cheated with Komi was worse 🤷‍♂️

Scribble hub readers are in support of having her redeem herself in the upcoming arc mostly while Patreons doesn't give a fuck and just told me to do what I want with her. They want a happy ending though, they mentioned and wouldn't like her to end up with another dude.