Thank you for commenting soooo muchhh...
And he walked out of the office with the taste of iron in his mouth.
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Fixed. Sorry for that. You might find more tho...
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Maafin bang. Cuma ini flaws yang aku buat supaya dia gak perfect. Kalo mau diruntut, mungkin dia capek. Soalnya kalau heartnya dikasih ke Imelda, akan ada perang yang mungkin lebih besar lagi. Pikiran dia sih gitu.
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Anime & Comics · ImjustAboy_
Should be fixed now. Temporary, I'll give it a read later
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Anime & Comics · ImjustAboy_
Now that you mentioned it... Yeah. I don't even remember about Itachi. Dangit
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Anime & Comics · ImjustAboy_
By no background in this particular chapter are you reffering to no description about the state of the restaurant as the scene moves? I will not pretend this fic is AI free, I do use some to stitch my idea. But not before writing the full chapter and ask AI to reword it,
I mean with his abiltity, expanding the space inside while the bulding looked small inside.
UH... Ludwig can expand the interior of the restaurant. I maybe imply it in the early chapter. He just not go big at once.
Now that I read back, I have overused it, it seemed. Sorry for that.
Not lethal damage. Not even close to what Ilea knew she could do.
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When the Demon King finally fell, Ludwig was tired. It had been more than a decade since the war started, and finally, he could do what he always wanted to do. Opening a restaurant. However, the restaurant proved to be more than what he bargained for.119 Chs 1.5k Collections
Was the most dangerous of all.
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