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Garchomp/Kommo-o are my favorite dragon types

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Option 3 - I would like a harem with Riveria, Haruhime, Ryuu, Aphrodite, Demeter, Rose and Yamato!

Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!

Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

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Both black, and white are colors because we can see them transparent and clear are not colors because we see through them like windows yet we persieve them unlike if something is truly invisible then how do we know it real, so white and black are colors because white reflects light and black absorbs it thus are eyes perceive it.

Luffy wore black tactical pants with military-style black boots. He went shirtless, revealing his muscular build and front tattoos. He had a black captain's cloak, identical in style to Gold D. Roger's, draped over one shoulder. On the back of the cloak, he customized it with a pirate skull, a Jolly Roger with the Straw Hat. He wouldn't change that from the original. His whole style was black, as it was his favorite color.

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

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Unfortunately this happens in war and speaking subjectively and strategically this might be someone else. Who will gain more from this both sides weak fighting each other who will come in who benefits most in war the rich the elites thoughts in power.Absolute power will corrupt absolutely and the innocent suffers on both sides, and both sides are blinded by anger and anger makes people stupid sorry if it sounds callous but war is always ugly in the end we are all people no matter are Race, Religion, and way of life. Good and bad people are a dime a dozen.

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ITS PIKACHU

(You can guess which will be the next Pokemon. Hint: it's final evolution will have two types and one of it is flying type)

In Pokemon With A System

In Pokemon With A System

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Yup

Gamer Path: Ben 10 - takes place in ben 10 with Secret Saturdays and maybe Generator Rex...

FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH

FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH

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It is a song by Kansas look it up it's pretty good if you have not heard it before plus it is a bit of an older song that was made in the 70's.

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Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more Once I rose above the noise and confusion Just to get a glimpse beyond this illusion I was soaring ever higher But I flew too high Though my eyes could see, I still was a blind man Though my mind could think, I still was a mad man I hear the voices when I'm dreaming I can hear them say Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more Masquerading as a man with a reason My charade is the event of the season And if I claim to be a wise man, well It surely means that I don't know On a stormy sea of moving emotion Tossed about, I'm like a ship on the ocean I set a course for winds of fortune But I hear the voices say Carry on my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry no more, no Carry on, you will always remember Carry on, nothing equals the splendor Now your life's no longer empty Surely heaven waits for you Carry on, my wayward son There'll be peace when you are done Lay your weary head to rest Don't you cry, don't you cry no more No more

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The writing quality is pretty good, and ledgable, but the plot leaves is all over the place. The speed of updates to the novel has a good pase.Why I think this is not good. First going to 3 diffrent places (DxD, some magic world with a dungeon, digital world) within the span of 20 something chapters makes the plot too confusing. Second the characters back story is just so confusing he wants revenge but the MC feels like he is lacking a personality with no character growth the character dose not feel genuine at all. Third this story is mainly driven by so many cliches; SPOILER: Issie mom becomes pregnant, 'THE WHITE KNIGHT' theme character, all girls are attracted to him, Batman esc. back story... It not bad to write with these cliches there is just no spacing in between plots ther needs to be more detial, and needs to be fleshed out more. Four if you are not writing a character that is not going to have a harem don't start him off in a world that is basically softcore p*** with fan service characters. Five everything seems too forced, and the MC feel fake and bland. To the author your writing is good and you do have talent, but what do I know I've never written a story anyways I digress you should keep your character in one world to start off with and have him interact with the main characters of said plot, and whenever there is down time in between the first world plot you should go to another or just finish off the entire world events before moving to the next world. These are just my thoughts, and you can take them with a grain of salt, but in my opinion you should rewrite right before you went to that dungeon world, and stay in DxD.

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