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Is kinda upsetting when authors exagerate the rarity of things to this levels, like come on, 10 yrs, billions of people living of this game and you only have 4 legendary items??? I bet that the mc at some point where there are no other legendary, he will have 2. OMG what rare thing

Kinda nerf the zombies

Quite anticlimatic

Your obsession with speed is too much, akaoiji and akainu are admirals at the same lvl with kizaru, whose attacks are light speed lvl, so they can survive that speed with haki, also, luffy reacted to the laser beam which is close to light speed i think with haki

How can he make portale, i think i missed the part where he learns it

Always hate this part in the story where mc finds out he is a frog in the well and awe at everything, u chose basically to write about the biggest academy in the whole verse so it maybe to much for some readers, u now need to introduce a lot of infodump and force mc to cool down to a "weak-to-strong" type. Be carefull how you write to not lose the readers, the story was very good at keep you up, but now you are at risk of how much new things you are gonna introduce. NOW READ THIS, BE CAREFUL NOT TO LOSE MUCH OF MC GLOW, TILL NOW YOU INTRODUCES HIM AS OP OR AT LEAST FAST-CULTIVATION AND IS ONE OF THE PLUS FOR THE STORY, I UNDERSTAND THAT YOU WILL NEED TO COOL HIM DOWN, TO SHOW HIM THE BIG WORLD, BUT DONT LOSE THOSE ELEMENTS. PLEASE BE CAREFUL, I LIKE THIS STORY AND I WOULDNT WANT TO LOSE IT FOR SOME MISTAKES. See ya next chapter :)

You should really stop to put status at the start and end of the chapter, or make it shorter, is annoying, ugly and suggest your laziness (added there just to complete your number of words)

Good novel, but sometimes i cant think but to believe that these authors that put such a low paywall think of themselves to be reincarnated in the past where they know what sells and what not. Too bad

This chapter is like a punch in the face and a kick in the balls at the same time, that forced is the situation in the story

I understand what u want but maaan, i have to say it, to forced, more forced than the force skill, like based on the skills u showed he have he could kill her easly with an illusion (i remember it work perfectly well in 10 lev div - /+ so dont say it couldnt), like i understand what you want but u know how it felt? Instant K.O, like i was there immerse in the story, everything going well, i am on with the mc, i feel him, but then when she said that about u are weak, dont use skills etc it was like my soul flied away from your story, i even closed it, a little more i would throw my phone. Too forced, is hsrd to get a reader back in the story once u get him out, i say it as an advice, too many novels stay low bcs the reader cant feel the story anymore bcs forced situation (just to go well with the idea or story), it has to be sth more realistic, more touching.

Lvl 2 in one year seems off

Immortality like aging is theoretically possible