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The first chapters are great, nothing particulary new, but interesting nontheless. The problem starts at the 100 chapters, with the slice of life sections, wich became more and more dominant trought the book. This problems becames even worse when at around chp 230 it starts to turn into a romance drama centered novel, with all the cliches and out of character decisions. at this point I hope you like teens romances because 80% of the chapters became that only topic, heavily influence by the horrible and classic trope: misunderstandings. Suddenly the characters have 0 brains to talk to each other as per usual. The game parts are great, but at some point it becames wird, like, everythibg is just other praising the mc as a demigod or something, to the point it feels false or unreal, is hard to describe, but is extremly edgy, even by this genre standars. And if you are here for the alchemist part, forget it, no alchemy here. Maybe once per 50 chapters alchemy is remembered, but just as an afterthought, nothing relevant. Honestly is quite sad, the book started great (thus my 3.4 score for it) but then it degrades it self to a point that you buy a chapter taht is ONLY stats, and in this book, stats are just flavor, they dont really matter. My final recommendation is that only if you like heavy drama romance to read all, and if not, stop at chapter 300 it only will get worse. Anyways, thanks to the author for some amazing reading at the start of the novel.

It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.