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Hey, William Tex. I haven't heard from you in a while. Hope you are doing well.

I will give this one bit of criticism. Setting up Edith as a villainess taking over as Empress in this manner is very... cliche and a bad way of implementing it. This kind of personality is better off helping out the main character and his family with how things are progressing..... I can see her as a possible political side lover of Raphael. If she stays this course. Especially with her seeming to be creating her own political harem of males..... This would be one of the best ways to keep her as a possible "Anti Villain" (I suggest researching that term) or Villainess that is always allied with Raphael. We know what kind of Enemies the cast will be facing and how powerful they are. Edith has more potential in this series than what is currently happening around her. .......... So the possible two best choices would be to either put a second "green crown (hat)" on the prince or to have Edith have a "romantic" relationship with Raphael instead of a "political one" like she is manipulating with her current harem.

Thanks for the chapter. Have fun with that Vacation. You can tell us about it after you return to your home. Maybe.... you could get some inspiration from the vacation for all of your series. In some way. If that somehow happens.

I have given ideas in the past on how his "original" witches could blend into his faction. Man.... if only I could write the right words on here. To say it right without the chance of this being unseen.

Please. Start giving the O.G. girls some love. The witches June and Esther and the rest deserve some special loving. They were there at the beginning. The special group of witches from the beginning that joined his faction were the most fun and interesting to read about. So much potential with what they did for Victor. For the harem. How Yandere and Zealous have they become since the beginning?

June would be a great extra option for picking as a patreon picture. We miss our crazy witch June.

Thanks for the chapter Victor. Don't forget the witches from the beginning of the series. The witches that work for Ruby.

Thanks for the chapter Victor. Don't forget the witches from the beginning of the series. We need some updates on those girls who work for Ruby.

We still need some updates on the Other Witches that worked for Esther and were working for Ruby.

Don't forget to bring back the witches from the beginning

Thanks for the chapter

Agreed.... Very much agreed 💯.

We also have our Lamia needing some character development attention. Possibly by being "partners" with Yiksa. I just have this feeling that they somehow blend well together.

This bite system could be a good idea for the future as well.

Thanks for the chapter. We also have the wolf girl as well. She marked Astra. Enough for her two wives to go after her in the bedroom after the one time. That would spice things up if she permanently marked Astra as hers but then marked Refia as if Refia was making the wolf hers. Keeping Refia as the main dominant wife. Even marking Sari as her equal? Since Sari can be "both sides" in the bedroom. So, something like an Alpha bite (taking the lead), a beta bite (being equal), and an omega bite (allowing someone else to lead).

Tell her to make you Forget Him!!!!

Come on Christine!!! Become Louise's official Queen Consort!!! Let's go!!!!

Thanks for the chapter. I am really hoping that she is going to put multiple babies in her every time she is ready to have more. Renna will thoroughly enjoy being Astra's personal birthing den. Just like how Astra is already. Hmmmm...... please take note of this. It would be fun to see Renna and some other "women." Just like Renna lined up giving birth to the babies that Astra put inside of them after using her abilities to expand the kind of children she wants to create with them.

I know. It was always talking about how Yiksa was always doing the "pounding" as if she was instinctively trying to bring her elf clan back. I really want to see a good mix of babies between them. An orange scaled elf and a very dark skin Lamia. Elf looking one. With the orange elf being born with two male toys to dominate women with.

When Aethisia gets to sink her hooves into her wife, Prixia needs to calm down Yiksa by claiming her. I don't know why, but I see those two as a "shared/owned" but mated pair. They have both gone through things in their past. And they are interacting in "this kind" of family together as well. But Yiksa was almost always the one that was "pounding" Prixia if I remember. So... Yiksa should get some equal attention from her and have Prixia "be the one to be there" for her. Not quite official in the beginning, but something that could help develop Prixia as a character for this series. With what you have planned.