I DO think the story is worth it, and the synopsis of the novel sounded interesting, but all these infodumps are becoming too confusing to the point where I feel that if I keep reading I won't be able to understand the story itself since I couldn't be bothered to read the info dumps.
ch 27 The Great Speech.
Fantasy · DMadLord
chapter after chapter of infodumps, this is stupid. to entice readers to keep reading you need to first show the promise of a good story, bombarding your readers with infodump after infodump before the story even gets a chance to start was a dumb move. I would suggest rewriting the early chapters. at this point, I'm skipping through paragraph after paragraph and I don't even feel like I'm missing something relevant.
ch 0 7 The Realm Lord.
Fantasy · DMadLord
a terrible read. the mc went through sh** and is too dumb and pathetic to get a personality development. he got betrayed by his friends, allies and his wife. and what does he do? A whole bunch of nothing. he acts like the same wimpy pathetic moron as he did before he got betrayed. he apologises for everything all the time for no reason. he even apologises for things he has no control over like a pathetic wimp. he keeps shouting nonsense about making friends and stuff even though he literally just got betrayed by everyone he trusted. no intelligence with this mc whatsoever.
The Reincarnation of the Kingmaker
Fantasy · AlwaysLying_OnBed