Story line might be good but grammar is what u will have to work on, I can't read further because of poor grammar and editing.
ch 0 1 1. The Shinning Bright and Victory
Fantasy · silvaaresta
hope you get well soon and I know you r gonna rock the exams.............
ch 26 The punishment-II
Urban · Inara_Me
I would really like it if Rosetta and Eve become really best of the best friends. I really adore the cute and powerful bond between sisters, brother-sister or between friends........ Rosetta + Eve = Power Package or Power friends( it might sound little gibberish, hehe) as in Power Couple. I really love it when there is trust and loyalty is shown between characters. Hoping that Rosetta doesn't have any Ulterior motives (now or any in the future) So that we can see a journey of a very strong friendship between the two.
ch 59 Unintended Acquaintance-ship
Fantasy · ash_knight17
what if Noah turns out to be were wolf or something?????
ch 50 Taking sweet time
Fantasy · ash_knight17
when are u going to update, waiting eagerly 🥺
ch 10 Onto something
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
what kind of betrayal and who's gonna be betrayed.....Oh NO!!! I hate the word "BETRAYAL".
ch 23 Little betrayal- I
Urban · Inara_Me
OMG!!!!! 😱 what a twist!!!!!!!
ch 36 Wolf in Sheep's Clothing
Fantasy · DyaAran
eagerly waiting already!!!!!!!!!! It's really amazing.......
ch 34 Let the Cat out of the Bag
Fantasy · DyaAran
It will be really irritating if Gwen and her family didn't get killed by them after everything they have done to them (not to forget arla). It makes no sense that a duke and his daughter holds more power than the king and strongest of the dragons put together.
ch 199 At The Abondon Village
Fantasy · Dream_blue98
umm, I think the gift is seal or something which sets victor free from the loyalty he pledged to the FL or something???
ch 34 Let the Cat out of the Bag
Fantasy · DyaAran
I think Victor already fell for her but I'm not sure if he himself is sure about it or he do not want to accept this thing. There's a possibility that victor also transmigrated into the novel and wants to change his future by choosing someone else as his parter, who knows oh yeah only you(author) knows.
ch 23 Play Possum
Fantasy · DyaAran
well I cannot find ur instagram account, what should I do?
ch 0 1 Take me far
Fantasy · lifeisdynamite_
how can she believe Icarus from his last memory when she cannot believe what Rene said about her lie to Arabella about her husband killed her child...
ch 27 He is In Love with You
Reborn as a Mind-Reading Empress
Fantasy · Athena_Varinder