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love it. looking forward to more

I like this story. But the way these chapters are going. I feel like it will slow down the pace stupidly. I hope we don't have to wait a month and over 40 chapters to deal with itachi, obito and danzo

so if you had power and someone hurt your family. you would not do everything within your power to protect them?

not sure what has happend here. but the levels have been lowered. thought it might have been a mistake. now i know its not. the warrior level after 5 month time skip was fifty something. now its in the 40's. you also already had the observe skill earlier. now its gone. you need to either change previous status or read back previous chapters and correct levels. love the story so far but status needs to be corrected x

depends on how experianced the crew are. if they have only fought in training exercises then there will be many mistakes. it takes time to load and use cannons. many shots will miss or cause minimal damage. all that going on with the heat of battle would make it harder. so i would say 50 for a inexperienced crew. 20 for a battle hardend. may only need 1 to scare the enemy fleet. as i'm sure the enemy crews will lose moral from the sound and deverstation a cannon would cause

i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes Jack x

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this girl better get a beat down

this reminds me of the nightmare man. i love that fanfiction. look forward to reading more

great chapter. i look forward to seeing what happens with draco. although slow going you can see him changing to a decent character with quinns help

i love this. but the cliff hanger after cliff hanger is not good for me. i want to wait for a few chapters to build up. but its just to good not to read straight away. another great chapter can't wait for more

haha love the pitch meeting reference. ryan george ftw

who is charles? i thought the twins were called harry and henry

i'm not sure how to reply to you. Honestly i have no idea what to answer back. I dont care if you can write a chapter a day or a chapter a month. I just want to read more. reading about quinn has made me feel connected to a story. That hasn't happend in a long time. I'm not sure if my opinion means much to you. But you have a true gift for story telling. Thank you for replying to me and i wish you the best of luck in your future endeavours. Thank you Jack x

I would like to say, that i've read this book from the moment you started posting it. I fell in love from the start. This is truly a masterpiece. Every chapter that is realeased make me want for more. whenever i see the red dot next to this story i honestly get so excited. i was worried about how much i like this because so many authors just drop 30-70 chapters in. most harry potter fanfictions i love almost always stop when they get to the triwizard cup. i really hope you don't do the same. I'm not good at writing reviews or comments. I just really want you to know that your story has brought me so much joy. I love harry potter and this may be a taboo to say but i am loving this book more than the original story. I hope that you will continue making many more stories in the future. I wish you all the joy that you have bought me. Thank you Jack x