Quick thing I figured I should mention since I’m enjoying this story. The sentence “I still don’t know why should I give you one” should have the “I” and the “should switched. In english, an indirect question follow the order of subject (I) then the verb (should). A lot of non-native speakers of english end up screwing this up and its one of those small things that are simple to fix, but are just super common.
"That's a good point," Mark finally admitted after taking some time to consider my words. "But I still don't know why should I just give you one," he spoke. "Those things do not come cheap," he added while spreading his arms out.
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
Thanks for the chapter. Sorry for all the complaining.
ch 289 Unrivalled Will
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
A total massochist.
"Pain is but a fleeting feeling..." Atlas muttered as the pain reached its peak.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
This makes no sense.
It's more stupid proof than stupid proof.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Plz explain. I an so confused. This sentence makes no sense.
Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Or maybe you’re saying that the Sagittarius A* Black Hole at the center of this galaxy of printers has been replaced with a massive printer?
Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Are you saying that there is a galaxy with stars that have been replaced with massive star sized printers? If this is what you’re saying, then that means for a galaxy the size of the milky way the MC has 100 BILLION printers. Ignoring that the Milky Way is a “relatively” larger galaxy, the smallest know galaxy has 1000 stars. Plz, author, give us decent numbers. This just isn’t an acceptible comparison.
Now, in his ever-expanding Storage Dimension, a galaxy with the printer as its 'sun' began to rotate.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Just gotta point something out because I’m pedantic: “calmest air within a 1 million light years in diameter” indicates to me that there is a circle with a diameter of 1 million lightyears, which means that the radius of this circle is 500,000 LY in diameter, meaning that there is no calmer area of the sea within a range of 500,000 LY of the Eternal Voyager. This sentence is midly confusing.
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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
“Quantum Reef Domain” or “Quantum Rift Domain”?
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Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
If its not a train, then don’t call it a train. Maybe use a word from another language to signify that its something unique. Just adding a strange descriptor to the front of the word just makes it sound weird. Correction: it’s just that I’m used to cliches, and X Train / X Car / X Plane / X Ship is heavily cliched and I’m slightly annoyed. Clarification: this is a rant, please ignore.
Meanwhile, Maximus was in the Moonlight Empire, witnessing the first operation of the void trains.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Why do you do this? Just call them trains. A train is a train no matter what its made of or what rail it tuns on.
Meanwhile, Maximus was in the Moonlight Empire, witnessing the first operation of the void trains.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Awesome as always!! Thanks for the chapters!!
ch 2528 The Curtains Draw Close! I
Games · Adui
Thanks for the chapters!! Awesome as always!!!
ch 2526 Rage Against the Dying Light! IV
Games · Adui
Awesome as always! Thanks for the chapters!!
ch 2524 Rage Against the Dying Light! II
Games · Adui
Awesome as always! Thanks for the chapters!!!
ch 2522 Obscene Values! VI
Games · Adui
Awesome as always! Thanks for the chapters!!
ch 2520 Obscene Values! IV
Games · Adui
Awesome as always!! Thanks for the chapters!!
ch 2518 Obscene Values! II
Games · Adui
Thanks for the chapters!! Awesome as always!!
ch 2516 Alexander King's Apexification! IV
Games · Adui
Awesome as always! Thanks for the chapters!!!
ch 2514 Alexander King's Apexification! II
Games · Adui
I’m sorry, is this backward?
Although it was less than the tenfold difference of Black Water World, it was higher than the 365-fold difference of Great Zhou and Great Tang.
Cultivation: When you take things to the extreme
Eastern · Forget to wear a vest