WattsonSimp

3d

Commented

So is the skill making based on the level so Level 100 = Skills or Depending on skill level need this many levels?

ch 0 4 Astrea Academy [2]

Extra's Descent

Fantasy · athex

WattsonSimp

26d

Posted

Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it[img=Out of it]

Reborn as an Extra

Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains

WattsonSimp

27d

Commented

Cool

ch 141 A Rational Conversation

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

Fantasy · RighteousFilth

WattsonSimp

28d

Replied to WattsonSimp

Also the story probably feels that way because of the fact that the Author's first language isn't English meaning, Great Job!

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

WattsonSimp

28d

Posted

Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

WattsonSimp

1mth

Commented

Two of the same chapter interesting

ch 108 Reaping Rewards [part 1]

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

Fantasy · RighteousFilth

WattsonSimp

1mth

Posted

A bit bias from me. I love the story always wanted an actual crazy guy in my life.

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

Fantasy · RighteousFilth

WattsonSimp

1mth

Posted

Uhhh pretty bad, pretty bad. The first 5 chapters is just I am Saint of this so me strong. Omg me saint dragon? Me tell kill he kill wow. By the way this is a bunch of teenagers just like trying to kill each other day 1 like come on make it make sense.

School Transmigration: I, Chosen as the Saint by Dragons at the Start

Fantasy · Sesame_Cookies

WattsonSimp

1mth

Replied to WattsonSimp

Another thing you've written Esme way better than Alicia it just seems that you put more feeling into her character, I could be wrong but still. Alicia is just kind of there not knowing anything about him and he doesn't wanna tell her anything about his other persona while he supposively likes her. I understand that she might look at him differently if she knew that he was "Ralyks" but maybe just maybe that's a hint that she's not the one. They also have opposing views in the world she doesn't wanna be there while he feels fulfilled in that world. But yeah it just depends let's see how stubborn Rey will be.

ch 446 The Most Unexpected Offer

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

WattsonSimp

1mth

Commented

Honestly it just seems like Esme is the one. Bias? Yes. Anyways hopefully the relationship develops with either because it's just looking really slow. I like the story though. Rey kind of unaware of female sentiment still literally left her while she was talking kinda messed up 😔

ch 446 The Most Unexpected Offer

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

WattsonSimp

1mth

Commented

Interesting grammar there coach.

"I'm have tons of passive protection, so you wouldn't have been able to pry open the mask no matter how hard you tried!" Rey said, folding his hands.

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

WattsonSimp

2mth

Commented

ch 313 An Absolute Monstrosity

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

WattsonSimp

2mth

Commented

Did you mean"Rey" instead of "Reg"

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An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

WattsonSimp

10mth

Commented

Good Chapter 😌

ch 52 Chapter-52 Grebbers [Part-3]

THE NINTH HERO

Fantasy · Zeroce

WattsonSimp

10mth

Commented

Great Story man. Keep it going!

ch 51 Chapter-51 Grebbers [Part-2]

THE NINTH HERO

Fantasy · Zeroce

WattsonSimp

1yr

Posted

So it's not bad. The comedy it's just out of place and that makes it hard to read.

Reborn As A Nephilim: The Rise of A Manaless Prince

Fantasy · Sleepy_Slime

WattsonSimp

1yr

Posted

so uh the whole story is childish, it's actually extremely boring to read I don't know how this is trending but hey man it's just bad, like when you read a good book and then decide to read a book that you read a long time ago and you notice that it's trash like that.