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I’ll backtrack a little from my previous comments. Your apparent love for details makes fights pretty good, but that’s as far as I’ll relent.

Your really gotta relax on the details and repetition. I don’t need to read about how “the forest was a battleground for survival but is now a monument for one individuals ability to survive” multiple different times.

Is artorias going to use the abyss walker fighting style or just be a regular swordsman?

They’re- They are There- There was a person there. It’s over there. Their- Personal; Their arms were sore

That chart is also talking about the average everyday citizen not trained individuals

Yes I looked at that too but you compared the mc’s body to Chris hemsworth but he is around 6’3 and is somehow the same weight. Compared to LeBron James who is 6’9 and weighs 250+. It’s impossible to be 6’8, look like Chris Hemsworth, and be at the bottom of the ideal weight range

210 is pretty light for someone who is 6’8

Where did you get the cover picture?

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Do you have any plans on ever continuing the thanos crusade?

If you’re lacking motivation and unsatisfied with your work you should take a break

His ability to resurrect apparently anyone is mildly annoying

Good luck on your novel i guess