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ch 1360 The Power of Blood (Part 2)

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ch 1314 Hidden Threat (Part 2)

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"Scarlett had yet to trigger a world tribulation..." - This would be better wording for that sentence.

She brought with her rich spoils but little progress. She had achieved the violet core and quickly brought it to the bright level, yet in those five years since she had faced Salaark in the Desert, Scarlett had triggered a single world tribulation.

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I like the expression curl up into a smile that represents the slight bending or the appearance of bending space and time. That's That's nice touch. p;

Oceans and continents were supposed to be fixed, yet she could swear to have seen the waters between Jiera and Garlen curl up into a smile for a split second. Tyris ignored the phenomenon as Fenagar's words echoed in her mind, rekindling her fury.

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*Fighter not fight.

ch 1096 Double Date (Part 2)

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"She trusted he would help her survive..." Would be a much better way of starting that sentence.

She trusted him would make her survive, but the perspective of entering a world of pain that might last hours was far from alluring.

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