TurtleShellDaoist2 - Profile

It's a nice read. I literally found the novel while searching for dao academy webnovels on google. It's amusing, the MC is kinda cute, realistic, and fun overall. There is not much combat until the end but I like it that way. Wish the author would go back and continue updating it.

This should have been much better, but apparently it isn't just a crazy lick but a crazy author too.. It's enjoyable but I just couldn't keep reading due to bad writing.. I started reading for the fun of it and then when I started to get bored of the humor I was invested in the plot -even though the author changed some things about Ronald's previous lives and the world's supposed 'history'/future several times-... -too much useless info at the beginning of every chapter -sidtracking: in the midst of a fighting scene the author suddenly switches to useless info dumb or brings up sarcasm trying to be funny (which even if it's funny you don't laugh but get pissed off it because it's in the wrong place) -skipping and flashbacks: something important happened, or fight is at it's ending, or important plot points supposed to be revealed in conversation.. Then the author just skips it and goes on with his useless humor and info dumb, try to continue the plot -while your mind is still thinking about wtf the conclusion was- until a few chapters later or maybe even more .. -thought process and conversations mixed, something is supposedly internal thoughts suddenly commented on by other characters, and even wide range conversations with characters that has a way gets in the mix, and worse of all characters that aren't in the scene and shouldn't have wide range communication suddenly interject or enter the scene.. The author switches the POV too much and too suddenly, with no sense who is talking to who and who is on the scene.. And when this style is even mixed with sarcasm in the middle.. Ughh.. I just couldn't keep at it