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I like it better when the men don’t turn into idiot love brains every time. It’s too juvenile and easy. Why is Astrid becoming an incubus with a harem of birds & bees? I still don’t see a serious genius level soldier becoming a shy idiot who loses his reasoning over a pretty face with a heinous reputation and serious problem with not knowing the concept of personal space, is famous for being handsy & clingy, and a filter between his mouth & brain.

Too short a chapter. Nice to see that we might find out backstories from Wild’s gang plus their abilities. Especially since their the empire’s ”elite” force.

Because one has the $$$$ and POWER to do so: imagine the power and $ required to do the computer hacking to get the information, then the $ to keep his hot searches forefront, and then the law fees to process this lawsuit. Like it says, you have to be a giant agency (one of the top 1-2) in the entire country to sue. That’s why it’s a novel* approach (*both meanings of novel; new, or a book), obviously not at all realistic for us plebes, only royalty can do this.

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So was it Rong Zi who wrote the Demon king’s story down?

Please may I get links to the parable (with english translations and explanations of the layers of wordplay!)?!

Can you tell me where to find those stories of Lickety - Split and Wontons.…I would need a translation that can relate the layers of that tale?! Thank you!

Yep. predictable isn’t it .

This is all just too darn easy. There is no sense of challenge for this charachtwr when everything is so easy for him. If he’s already this OOP (so smart with such a SS+ memtal strength), how is life challenging at all? The dynamics of this novel seem off. I absolutely love your other work, but somehow this novel already doesn’t give me the same feeling. Why is this work so different than your others?

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PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME THAT ALL OF THE SUDDEN THEY TELL REAS HOW AWESOME HE IS AND IN ORDER TO GAIN FORGIVENESS, GIVE HIM SOME SORT OF ENTRANCE QUALIFICATIONS FOR THE MILITARY/ If you do, I will just feel like Reas is being bribed by the Prince and Astrid is being pimped put. If this situation binds them all closer and it is onstant;y accepted, I’ll puke. It doesn’t work that way in any sense in the real world or how people interac….given the absolute sense of purity, honesty, and goodness you’ve given the brothers as personal/familial qualities. No one would roll over and go ok, given the dangers of their identities you gave them. It just wouldn’t make sense.

I find it chilling that Wulf says to Astrid how he wants to eat his home cooking, etc. and thinks, then ignores how unwelcome and horrible he treated Astrid’s family, before Reas rushes in. The Prince is completely unconcerned about Reas’ injury except for not wanting Astrid to blame him. This kind of person wouldn’t hesitate to do things to put them in harm againif it brings him closer to Astrid. Reas is 100% correct in finding the attention the Prince has for Astrid to be dangerous - the Prince is a violent sexual predator who stalks and isolates his prey from family. Reas is his twin and was involved. The Prince needs to apologize to him too, just as much as Astrid. The steps he has done to apologize to Astrid is wih the intent to see him again. The Prince is just satisfying his internal needs. It has NOTHING to do with being aware of why his behaviors are so wrong and need correcting. The Prince is just selfishly looking out for his own desires.

Author, that last sentence is incorrect. it reads as if it was the Prince that smiled, not Astrid, with the sentence structure the way that it is currently .

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