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just wondering .. . bai renxiang's grandfather seems to be well off, why did she not ask for a milion for her mother's surgery? i thought her grandfather was dead, that woukd have make sense. .

currently in chapter 30.. if not beacuse the story has potential, i would have dropped it this early . i can tolerate the grammatical errors, but not the overly detailed and cheesy conversatios that are dragging the flow of the story. . its like you are listening verbatim to the actual conversations of people that even nuances are included . so annoying. .

i previously rated this 4.2, but now that i finished the novel i was utterly disappointed with the ending. .too rushed, and too many unnecesaary inserts. . like, why mention the missing uncle and forget about it? story ended without finding the uncle, not even mentioning it again. . why mention the suspicious death case of hanxing's mother that might involve shen yong, then nothing else after this? what happened to wei xeir and zuang li? to bai youyou, cheng songyan, and shen sisi? to xiao yu? jinyan seemed to have a very significant past, why not mention? and there are other more loose ends! author, dont just finish the novel in a rush. .

dropped early.. stupid fl...for whatever reason or danger there is, putting the fl to jail means that ml is not powerful enough to protect her.. after the fl is released, a kiss from ml would melt down her heart and knees, just like that? ??? author, cant you give the fl a little dignity?