Cory_Tuckett

2yr

Posted

I love this story. What will be her next trial, and what are the trails for? I wonder. The writer needs to do more on this story. I can’t wait for the next one to be done. Will she become a godlike person or what,l. Also she needs to have more girls in her harem . Get a lizard woman and others please.

Rebirth Online: From Single Mother to OP Demon Lord

Fantasy · Sfayte

Cory_Tuckett

3yr

Commented

so they want them to escape. Im just kidding. but you should change this.

Vitiate didn't mind fighting these Vampires, but Siena couldn't defend herself in this situation. He quickly grabbed her hand and made a run for it. "What the hell!? Catch them, they're trying to escape, we can let them get away!" Edman screamed hysterically, everything would be ruined if they got away!

Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War

Fantasy · Monster_Paradise

Cory_Tuckett

3yr

Posted

I like the plot and the characters. He needs to get his stepsister as a lover too. and get more demon slaves like foxy. I think he should have a girl lizard man and a girl Catlike demon. I like that there is a demon realm and a normal, earth realm.

The Incubus System

Fantasy · Nanakawaichan

Cory_Tuckett

3yr

Commented

You need to change Their to There, and I see a couple other grammar issues to in other paragraphs.

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A New World, an immersive game experience

Games · Breuno

Cory_Tuckett

3yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 62 Changed Woman

Mastermind: Genderbent Villainess

Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine

Cory_Tuckett

3yr

Commented

you spelled scent wrong.

Lucien could smell Ghilanna's musky sent growing more and more. He also wanted to lose himself in pleasure now, but his mind was focused on resolving problems first. He also wanted to take it slow with the sweet elf, so he held out his hand to her with a gentle smile on his face.