Cort_Whitmire

Cort_Whitmire

male LV 13

if i could write my thoughts as stories id still be shit but at least i may inspire others to write better

2020-03-27 Joined United States
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Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
4 days ago
Replied to Cort_Whitmire

let the harem plan commence

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Cort_Whitmire
4 days ago
Commented

I feel like it would be funny if Taylor caught him singing one of her songs like Romeo and Juliet, or highway Don't care where it's all about, like the love connection. And that's when she walks up on him, like during his run or something

Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
10 days ago
Commented

There are a lot small to large stars, movie to music throughout them all we don't actually know who they are. so you can give them any personality from lovable to horrible,for a first girl friend if their relationship doesn't fit in the end you can just make them friends or hate each other. on the profession point it do you want them to bond over music and how they're both musicians or have her be an actor and they bond over differences and him one day being in a movie or two it's all up to you/the role of the wheel

Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
12 days ago
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thank you

Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
12 days ago
Commented

1st So , is it just a skill system , or is it a system that I don't know , is pushing him into some sort of profession. the info hand it over

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Cort_Whitmire
12 days ago
Commented

what thell is the system i need to know

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Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
12 days ago
Commented

What is this timeline? it's been a week since Hydra has taken the scepter, and I'm assuming that since they've gotten the scepter that they've moved into socovia, but in no way is that long enough for them to create Wanda and Pietro. I believe if the author is going for a wanda heroine. But It feels a bit early. Like fight off Hydra for a while, then raid the base with like The Avengers cause that's how it happened. I believe I could be wrong, but still It would take time for her to get powers. also, what happened to the chapter?I don't remember you.Actually, writing that the hydrate agents took it while they were still in the building.Because I believe that's what happened to the movie.

Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
12 days ago
Commented

Plot the boiling water is just an excuse for him to kick a kid who clearly is wanting to ntr his own dad

Cort_Whitmire
Cort_Whitmire
16 days ago
Posted

for the synopsis alone I would read this but the subtlety is immaculate