Webnovel Author: Salmon_El_Solomon - Fanfic Collection

This is not to insult or offend anyone, this is my opinion. I honestly don't know what I was expecting when I started reading this, but I must say that I ended up disappointed. many totally unnecessary time jumps, the "plot" advances very quickly, the power levels are a disaster, more than anything the powers of the characters, the clear example is in the rating game chapters, the MC having difficulties with someone who He only attacks with fire, one of his powers being the embodiment of the concept of fire... Another thing is the severe nerf that both the MC and his friends have, who are herrschers, incarnations of concepts, beings capable of destroying countries - continents from birth... according to the power level of dxd they would be seredñs from maximum Satan to super demons or god kings like Zeus, amatersu

This translator does not respect the original author, he does not give the original name of the work, nor where to look for the original. ..................

No no no, if you read right, all the others names are correct, only the mc is wrong, the mc is the only Xiao Lin in the Malfoy family

I don't want to offend anyone is my opinion. Shit novel whit a shit translation, what do you expect? Remember this is a translation. Character design is a shit. Character development is a shit. World development is a shit. Interaction between the characters is a shit.

I loose is worse literally is worse he is the son of Narcisa Black and Lucius Malfoy,both Britain and his name is Xiao Lin... Just imagine how shit will be the novel

I can bet all my money that the name of the original is something like Xiao Malfoy or something Chinese, but he is the son of Narcisa and Lucius

Honestly speaking, I don't want to offend or insult anyone, this is just my opinion. This sucks, it is literally and exactly the same as the original, although it barely changes, but in the end there is no difference, this is so exact that the mc is the same as the same actions, in the end we have a pathetic Japanese beta mc. He has the power to do what he wants but in the end he is a little dog just like the original mc in the book, the girls' interactions with the mc, everyone's attitude to the mc and the mc's interactions with the world suck, they are the same to the original, this cannot be considered ff, at most it is a summary of the original, because what covers 200 chaps in the other this one covers in 20, that is the difference. so for me its a solid 1 star, 0 story developement, 0 character design and 0 world background. i only put 1 star because i can't put 0

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Although I don't like the novel, the one punch man side is easy to understand, the thing is one punch man in the manga has a loot of chapters , but if you put it in a novel it's only about 60- 70 chapters because in one punch are a lot of images of the fights and scenes, who in the text can be resumed in one o le two paragraphs.

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I don't plan to insult or offend anyone it's just my point of view. Sincerely this sucks for me, the mc and the situation around him feels to stupid, like he isn't being able to use correctly the power of light being born from the strongest angel (this is Canon) and a seraph no else. And don't mention the intelligence and actions of the mc, a grown man reborned... The interaction between characters and the MC really sucks, the "development" of the mc too. If the mc was born from a low angel and the mc has mental problems all will have sense, whit the things being as now the story sucks

https://www.69shuba.com/book/33918.htm Raw

https://www.69shuba.com/book/33918.htm Here it is bro-sis?

What do you want, the man reborn in the tatsumaki family and his surname is zai...

This is my opinion and I don't want to offend or insult anyone. This is no better than a mtl, for an example, the fucking MC, is a Chinese reborn in a Japanese familiy,in Japan, and the fucking name is Chinese...