Yup, but I personally like the devour enemies and biologically improve route better, like Alex Mercer
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: A Stray Cat
Book&Literature · Baph0met
No bro, this is not the right way to go, the MC is supposed to be on a revenge mission so inserting Felicia so early in the plot is a bad move, It's anticlimactic, first solve the revenge plot and then if you want you insert Felicia and 500 other characters, but first finish the first plot, instead of being happy to see Felicia like I normally am now I feel annoying because she interrupted the atmosphere that you author had built little by little in the last chapters, bad move...
ch 15 Chapter 15: Felicia Hardy
Book&Literature · Baph0met
I swear, even before I had the internet I knew Spider Man and his identity, the MC of this fanfic seems to have lived totally isolated from reality, I even dare to say that +90% of the world knows who Peter Parker is
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Trouble Begins
Book&Literature · Baph0met
It's an alien with no sense of man or woman, personally I wouldn't mind having one in my body, it's like an AI but better
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: A Stray Cat
Book&Literature · Baph0met
What is attractive about reincarnation fanfic in series like Marvel or DC are the actions that the MCs take based on the knowledge they have about the franchise, If the MC doesn't know the franchise the fanfic is in, it loses a lot of appeal.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A Delivery Boy
Book&Literature · Baph0met
Don't forget the cliché of brain pain 😂😂 pain in the brain, it's ironic when brain surgeries are done with the patient awake and still the patient doesn't feel anything
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A Delivery Boy
Book&Literature · Baph0met
???
Thanks for the chapter
ch 45 Chapter 45: Roadside Intimidation
Movies · Muzan_Zoldyck
Cononically the newspapers in Marvel are all a bunch of ignorant and ïdiøts, JJ is a great example
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: T-Virus and invitation letter
Movies · Muzan_Zoldyck
Thanks for the chapter
ch 23 Chapter 23 : Another One (18+)
Anime & Comics · Venerable_White57
Like, But we are human beings, we choose sides and we support them, in Douluo there are 2 sides, Tang San side and Spirit Hall side, we have God's perspective that means we can know and see everything that happens and judge based on what we see, so after seeing Douluo I took my side, Spirit Hall side, I explained my reasons in my comments, the Tang San side is literally the evil side from my point of view and that of the common people of the continent, many of his actions harmed entire races and planets due to his selfishness, I believe that even if his way of thinking was a caveman, it still does not exempt him from his bad actions, I believe that a person like Tang San who did not change his way of thinking even thousands of years of existence has no salvation, because he was not isolated, he watched over hundreds of planets and could intervene (illegally) in the lives of mortals at will, even after seeing millions of life stories it didn't change so the problem wasn't confusionism, it was Tang San. If Douluo's story only covered Tang San's life until he ascended I might even be on his side, but Douluo's author gave us the continuation of the story and the consequences of Tang San's shares, privatize the lucky tree of the continent where he was born, extinguish the only hope of the beast clan by inserting his daughter into the beast of destiny, allow the empires to continue their wars for +10k years and even longer after the merger of the Sun and Moon continent, the consequences of destroying the Slaughter City (personally, it's the one that bothers me the most), etc, etc, etc.
Dou Luo: This Tang San is Different
Anime & Comics · Un1que