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Exactly, in real life, truck kun is only responsible for pain, destruction and ruined lifes. So truck Kun do not come!
"[This is simply because you're reborn for the first time. The more times you're reborn, the more systems you'll experience.]"
The Wealthy Eldest Sister Rules Supreme
General · Tea Warm
Dies she look like the third rated person, who stole her luck? No, our SFQ is the most beautiful and unique, keep your third rate person away.
That glance made his brows furrow instantly, "Qingyao, doesn't this female celebrity look a lot like your younger sister?"
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
SFQ is glowing with luck.
Luck in abundance naturally looked different from when it was scarce.
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
I think, it is because SFQ, took away the Captain Jiang Zhou from the Ji family. As a reader it is quiet clear that the Ji family of Sijiu with that sickly lady Ji at the center has taken SFQ's luck, otherwise how could the sickly miss survive till now. As for the prophetic dreams that SFQ should have, is also with that sick Ji miss, or else how had she made the Myraid thousand muntains embroidery right after SFQ made it and made it like it was copied but without any emotions.
"Qingqing, you look much better," Nian Yi'an examined Si Fuqing's face closely. "But I can't pinpoint exactly what's improved."
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
Is she not supposed to have only one holiday? She is an intern working as a temp. employee who serves out lunch. Saturday is a working day for employees.
Since tomorrow is Saturday, I have a holiday tomorrow. I went through my closet and found a pretty dress. The dress was light pink in color.
That Sassy Villainess
Fantasy · grasina18
Aurthor Sama! Hi!😄 I am glad you noticed my comment.☺ On a much more serious note, can you tell me how you got so good at writing. I mean I am at chapter 50 right now, and your foreshadowing about the third party behind Amanda, the photographs and the whisper before her coma, is amazing, totally another level. Still don't like Cyrus though. I am waiting for the third 'child' under Papa Adam and Mama Elie, or maybe that guy who was there for her funeral.
Maybe the top of the list are the people developing "those" kinds of things?
Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
Urban · Llaellen
I am happy that you noticed! But on a much serious note, your writing skill is increasing with leaps and bound that I am speechless. The foreshadowing done during her coma and the photographs, is so good! Chef's kiss! I am on Chapter 50 now, and leaving a review. I still do not like Cyrus, although it seems he has lost memory or has been brainwashed...but, nope, still don't like him!
Maybe the top of the list are the people developing "those" kinds of things?
Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
Urban · Llaellen
And you still pffended by being called a mama's boy?
In the end, she didn't follow it. Doesn't that mean, she was also not following his mother properly?
Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
Urban · Llaellen
Don't make him the male lead, especially after you had him have three kids with Susan. No hate on Susan though, since I don't know her character, but she did cheat with Cyrus during their marriage. But, really you are forcefully making him the male lead right now.
He placed a hand on her arm when Heather's eyes flew open.
Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
Urban · Llaellen
Look author sama, foreshadowing is good but using, 'or something' and 'that something' a lot of time is not. It makes your story line seem half assed. Do a better job at foreshadowing, by showing it through suddent changes in emotions on certain topics, rather than just adding, 'something'. I get it you are desperatly trying yo keep Cyrus from looking like the bad guy, but that can not be done. He neglected her, even if it was in hatred, and hurt her. For that she atleast deserves a grovel since she already had some positive history with him, in regards to the promise and him not knowing who she truly was.
Maybe the top of the list are the people developing "those" kinds of things?
Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise
Urban · Llaellen
Why am I suddenly so glad? IIts good to have his worthless feelings killed in the cradle.
His disappointment was evident, and any budding feelings of admiration he might have had vanished.
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
Doctor: The injury could either lead to death or just cripled limbs and a lifebound in wheel chair. It could either be good or bad.....
He wondered whether to add to her troubles when he heard the doctor frown at the freshly taken X-rays, "This injury could be severe, or could be not too serious, depending how you look at it."
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
She is shocked now? Don't you think it is quite late Ella fella for you to be shocked? Slow on the uptake much?
To say Ella was shocked was an understatement. She clearly remembered everything, her life before the pain, the pain before her death and the finality of her death. She was so sure that everything was real. She marvelled 'I have truly been reborn. Am I really here? In this world or is this just life's way of showing me what I have lost?' She felt dizzy from all that she had experienced since she opened her eyes.
A Tale Of Betrayal
Urban · KingCiwe
So, she was awale but refused to wake up all the while being conscious and congniziant of the change of her surroundings? Yeah sure.
Ella's eyes trembled as she hesitated to open them, however she could no longer continue sleeping. She opened her eyes, the room was bright, and the surface she laid on felt familiar. Ella sat up; the bed was enormous. 'Where am I? ' Ella wondered. Ella looked around, and everything looked so familiar to her yet strange. Ella pulled herself into a kneeling position on her bed while she looked around. As she took everything in, her eyes widened, and her jaw dropped in disbelief. 'This is my room!' Elle thought and fell back into a sitting position. 'Did they inject me with a hallucinogenic substance of some sort' she thought to herself. 'NO, NO, NO IMPOSSIBLE' shouted Ella in her mind.
A Tale Of Betrayal
Urban · KingCiwe
SFW: Yeah, I am openly mocking you now. What can you do? HUH?!?
She was calm and composed. "My APM is probably a bit higher than yours."
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
Yu Xiheng: SFQ has a high IQ and EQ as long as she is not at the recieving end. Let this case rest for a while, we will revisit setteling down when my wife realises that I want to be her husband.
Yu Xiheng picked up his teacup, drinking calmly, sighing, "Smart everywhere, but some places are not so smart, let it rest a while."
After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
I think her account of the god NINE will make much less of a problem than this account.
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After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
Urban · Qing Qian
she slapped herself.
Yu Han raised her hand and slapped herself twice suddenly. Qin Yu was so shocked that she could not react in time.
When The Top Hacker Becomes A Female Supporting Character, She Amazes The World
Urban · JQK
This game is another level Boss! It comes with an accompaniment to follow the player's mood.
Her heart broke into pieces and a suffocating pressure descended into the surroundings. The sound of gloomy funeral song seemingly played in the background.
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling