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Elena_Nickel

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I'm the mom.

2020-04-01 Joined United States

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almost as if, she

Aila left her room, her mindset on finding the kitchen and retrieving some painkillers. Yet, as soon as she stood outside her door in the hallway, she stopped and gazed at her surroundings, the natural light glimmered through the mansion, and she began to feel nostalgic. Aila recognised the hallway she stood in; glancing to the left, she saw a grand set of white double doors at the end of the hall. Frowning, she started to make her way to them, almost as is she was being called towards them.

HUNTED

HUNTED

Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

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she glared at Yman

He glared at Yman and saw him raise his brow like a typical villain. She hates him! She hates him very much!

The Mysterious Black Magician

The Mysterious Black Magician

Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow

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drool inducing ; is proper sentence structure here.

"Huh? What...?" Sylvia asked, watching the man deftly buttoning a crisp egg white color shirt, that covered his broad chest and his drooling inducing abdominal muscles.

Sold to a Prince!

Sold to a Prince!

Fantasy · Yolohy

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now , wanting should be not,wanting

He danced for an hour with her until her heels ached, until her back pained. She stifled a pained groan, now wanting to show her vulnerability to him. With a cold grin, he ended the dance. She staggered a little and he led her to his guests.

Ileus: The Dark Prince

Ileus: The Dark Prince

Fantasy · MishaK

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just how old is he?

Just old is he? How many boars has he killed and skinned at this young age?

Sold to a Prince!

Sold to a Prince!

Fantasy · Yolohy

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the sentence says cut off guard and it should be caught off guard

I stop by the kitchen first to fill up my water bottle, but I’m cut off guard by the faint scent of my mate, a calmness washed over me like a wave of cold water distinguishing a raging fire.

Tame a Monster

Tame a Monster

Fantasy · ShadeBladez

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instead of using (voice out) at the end of this sentence you could end it with (say).

"Are you nervous?" He suddenly heard Rea's question while they were slowly walking the palace corridors. Probably, he noticed her unsettled eyes."Of course not," he replied. 'It was more of an ecitement than nervous.' He thought but did not voice out.

The Mysterious Black Magician

The Mysterious Black Magician

Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow

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