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Good lord this chapter is massive and fantastic, thanks Eve
ch 435 Leash
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos
Heat is still Heat, making us grow attached to characters just to kill them. Really adds stakes to a novel that's lacking so often
ch 436 Chapter 436 ā Rise of Warriors
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Woohoo more Monica, a love interest that lasts longer than 1 arc
ch 424 Harbor
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos
Well no, youāre an initial commander and worried about fighting early commander mages. Def not on your level still fighting up a rank
'Sure enough, all my advantages only put me at the same base level as Mages. Everything else depends on me.'
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
I appreciate the speedrunning through the boring parts of the trial, would just be filler to describe him killing initial stage beasts
The fifth one needed Shang to release two strikes instead of one, but that was about it.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Gonna have to face his trial without the dean to help prep him this time sadly
ch 332 Chapter 332 ā Third Question
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Is this phrased correctly? It feels slightly off but Iām not sure how
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Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos
I love it
A purple-red membrane enveloped the knife while Khan thrust it forward. He didn't want to kill Rodney, but he didn't need his legs to speak. Maybe that injury would even push him to get to the point.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos
āHimself as his fiancĆ©eā is wrong I think, not sure
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Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos
Was actually irritated that he chose 19 at the start of the chapter, but you laid out the reasons well enough that iām not irritated. I feel like thatās pretty hard to do properly through writing like that so nice chap Heat
ch 221 Chapter 221 ā Not What but How
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Please, you already donāt have a clear conscience we had a mini arc over that
He had to decide between a slightly bigger increase in power for killing someone innocent or a normal increase in power with a clear conscience.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Lightning is the Only Way has minimal romance that has very little impact on the story imo. Sword God in a World of Magic has no romance at all so far
"Correct," the young man said as he leaned back again. "However, you becoming powerful is exactly what will change the world."
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Sounds like they fought the beasts with the aliens but didnāt fight the aliens? Not sure
Humans called these strange powers 'innate abilities', and with these powers they fought back against the beasts and mutants with all they had, along with the alien races. Finally, they were able to send them back through the rifts, sealing them temporarily.
I Shall Cuck Everyone
Fantasy Ā· Perverted_Fella
Not sure this totally holds up. From this perspective the dean offered him power in the form of the procedure. Should he have turned it down because he didnāt earn it on his own? He needs the Gravis experience against the middle heaven where he learns his power isnāt all self earnes
"I think it's more about the journey and less about the goal," Shang explained. "On top of that, I want to achieve it on my own. If someone else were to hand me something, that something wouldn't have any value. I want to achieve my goal on my own. I want it to be something I can work towards."
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
What a dope idea Heat, really creative
"They can turn matter into Mana."
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
This chapter was written so incredibly well, gj Heat
ch 159 Chapter 159 ā True Power
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy Ā· Warmaisach
Love this moment š
"Fuck!" Khan loudly cursed while gently pushing Monica down and straightening his position. He was fine now. His senses were slightly off, but his top shape was only seconds away.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy Ā· Eveofchaos