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Amazing story with the research done about the harry potter world lore. The characters are growing up, not just a copy/paste from the books, there is reason for things happening thought the events ( stone/basilisk/animagus/tournament ) are the same over the years. I'm around ch.450 and couldn't resist a few peaks into the future ( ~950 for now ) and it brings me to why I'm dropping it despite a good review. Plotting, helpless and hopeless things, like a noose tighening, the hp lore is a dark one and rightfully so. I enjoy a fair amount of realism but stuff like hydra breathing down their neck everywhere, her magic starting going bad ( ~ch.450 ) and the forced marriage of pureblood ( Rowan got one too way later but nothing is set down ), all of it weight down and I don't really enjoy such a dark story. Tho, it is due to my own taste and I wholeheartedly awknoledge that the story is a great find if it fits your niche. It was a nice read till now, thanks you for your hard work dear author and I hope you enjoy continuing writing !

Hope you continue enjoying writing for a long while as I finished ~410 chapters in a few days as it got me really hooked. Thank you for your hard work !** The end got deleted, weird.

I don't know how much fanfiction of this type exist, but it feels really good to read something this serious and brutal/gore honest about the world of naruto that is filled with so much bull in the manga. Ninja life is a sad life when you look at it and even with all the work done, they remain as murder for hire in the end so seeing someone coming into this world to survive is really intertaining. The origin of his talents and the sole fact the bond worked this way throught their soul in the end is the sole point that I am peeved about but hey, to be honest it doesn't give an overwhelming boost as he needs to work for it. Him picking more women thus making the bond less special is something more about you as you pointed in one of your notes that meh. Otherwise, world building, power progression, political scheming and our Rei having a focus goal of living happily with his women/family translating to put their life then safety then happiness above all else is really well done and I love it ! I can't wait to see how far this can go once the storms in the element nations calm down, you mixed other anime/manga well enough with Claymore/Akame Ga Kill and another one? with the east that is still a mystery then we have space with the Otsutsuki and more open possibilities ? Nice to stay free enough about what you can write about. Hope you continue enjoying writing for a long while as I finished ~410 chapters in a few days as it got me really hooked, thank you for your hard work !