how does purity of the bloodline works. wasn't it less than 0.001%. how did she got 10% to her. suggestions I don't personally dislike info dump. it just need some space between info dumps. and unique terms make it hard to follow the story. just with generic term some times.and introduce more characters.
ch 21 Q & A [1]
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some of us like info dump and rpg stuff. it just need to be more connected to the current phase of the story to not feel artificial or forced to the story. taking it slow always make it interesting when half of the stuff is still mysterious. thanks for the story.
ch 20 The 16th Grail
Fantasy · The_Aegis
I like the story so far. but it feels like your forcing to much detail and world building in each chapter. having unique terms and complicated monetary system isn't always a good thing it just makes it hard to follow the story.but I'm loving the story so far. thanks for the chapter
ch 18 The Rankings
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thanks for the chapter.
ch 17 The Grail Auction
Fantasy · The_Aegis
thanks for the chapter. and how can one be the god of honour and deception.lol
ch 16 The Grey Group
Fantasy · The_Aegis
I have yet to read other book of yours. so I go with First option
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thanks for the chapter
ch 15 A Deal with the Devil
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thanks for the chapter
ch 14 Souls and Worlds
Fantasy · The_Aegis
thanks for the chapter. finally we can know what's going on
ch 12 Quest Completion
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thanks for the chapter
ch 10 Side-Story - TFR[1]: Plans
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I don't know whats going on. but I like where it's going
ch 0 9 The Three Grails and Second Quest
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thanks for the chapter
ch 0 8 That was... easy?
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thanksfor the chapter
ch 0 7 Oh. I guess I do have them...
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thanks for the chapter
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skill*
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how's your exam going
Water Dragon's Daily Life
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