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Quite a few grammatical mistakes author... I recommend you watch out those at least twice before posting new chapters, for example I saw 'I am turned my head' or something like that. There are quite of bit of 'I' written as 'i' as well. Some characters' phrasings don't feel natural either, especially Lumine.
ch 0 8 Wolvendom: Part 1
Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.
Video Games · sPenK_XD
'You moron!'
'you moron' she cried and tried to slap me, I quickly grabbed her hand and out of reflex I activated my power stone. The whole building started to shake, 'Kaneki you got a quirk' she said.
INFINITY STONES IN MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Zephyrous
"Day
"day 789, near the Garden. The ship is low on oxygen, and maybe a year more, I don't know whether I will be able to find, the last fragment of the space stone. I've already recorded the implantation log on day 546, the other two stones implanted in me are in good health. No side effects, I feel well."
INFINITY STONES IN MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Zephyrous
'Now that I'
Now that i think about it. All in life is temporary, all the planets, all the stars, even the fabric of time-space will cease to exist one day, at least from our logic.
Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.
Video Games · sPenK_XD
'All journeys'
All journies have an end, our life are nothing but a journey that will end at our death. Like my father, I too will eventually die, either now or later, either leaving behind offsprings to mourn or not. My end too, is fated.
Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.
Video Games · sPenK_XD
'its own people'
From the weakest insect to the hardest of diamond, nothing will remain forever. A life will eventually reach the end of it's lifespan and a rock will eventually erode, even the land we walk on will move and transform, until one day, the land and earth itself will become nothing but a dead planet, killed by itself, it's own people.
Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.
Video Games · sPenK_XD
'A life will eventually reach the end of its lifespan'
From the weakest insect to the hardest of diamond, nothing will remain forever. A life will eventually reach the end of it's lifespan and a rock will eventually erode, even the land we walk on will move and transform, until one day, the land and earth itself will become nothing but a dead planet, killed by itself, it's own people.
Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.
Video Games · sPenK_XD
Haven't started actually reading but I think you got confused between Visions and Gnosis... Gnosis are basically archons' visions, what makes at their position a higher form of Vision, Visions are round small objects that give people certain powers, they are granted by archons or Celestia.
ch 0 1 The Annoyance arrived.
Souls in Teyvat
Video Games · ARandomMob
How do you even get to the moon when planes are not invented yet?
ch 0 2 Ch-2 The Plan in Motion
Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Anime & Comics · Hkj
A lot of words are not capitalized correctly in the last few chapters. And a lot of '.?!' are missing.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: The forest demon ( 3 )
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'The demon's consciousness'
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Forest demon ( 2 )
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'behind the bushes'
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Forest demon ( 2 )
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'seriously not a single demon in sight'
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'"Hmm? What do you mean?"'
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'let me prepare'
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'The two immediately recognized'
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'back to the caravan to prepare for her departure'
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
'to notice her as one of them'*
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
Hey, has anyone seen my lyre?*
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The forest demon
Frieren: Breaking my natural instincts.
Anime & Comics · Jingle303
A lot of things are too exaggerated. First Carman's hatred toward the Fatuis, calling them evil and stuff. In the game Childe released a dangerous god but was partly manipulated by La Signora and Zhongli. La Signora Stole Venti's gnosis but didn't much more in Mondstat, in Inazuma she handled quite a few things with Scaramouche like schemes against the shogun and the country, but failed and did not amount to much. Wanderer turned dark because of the three 'betrayals'. Fatuis agents are for the most part just random soldiers doing their job. I believe of all the fatuis known only Dottore was evil with maybe the Rooster.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Struggle of an Orphan in Fontaine.
Genshin Impact: Reborn Engineer
Video Games · Unehehs_your_eheh