Wasted potential in my opinion
romantic/sexual
Then you've never seen a jumping spider
"Oh, she's shy. Alright, we will admire her from a distance." The older mage who taught his morning accuracy training class said softly, with a gesture for the others not to scare the spider.
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
I would have to guess that they saw no need to do it anymore
ch 52 Awakened Exams
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Started drinking coffee at 13
Karl tapped his mug. "I will stick with coffee, thanks. But if it's going to be far too loud to study in the garden, why don't we go to the patio in my room? It's plenty large enough, and there is a spell that isolates it from the rest of the campus. It's perfectly silent, and there is a good table out there."
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Why didn't he straight up tell the cook and druid about what he discovered? Why the lies?
ch 0 4 Windspeed Hawk
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
This is the paragraph you need to delete
Hikari successfully broke through to Elemental Forming Realm after another session with pushing herself to the limits against my Clones. Her first Secondary Core is of Earth Element.
Fantasy · Dyrem
You forgot the value of 1 day
He's obviously talking about immortal steel
Ming Ze didn't need to investigate to know that his body was now as strong as steel. He could probably withstand the slashes of most swords without the slightest scratch.
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
I went back and read the 2rd chapter again and your right, but can you reword the chapter to clarify his age
"I am like eight, so don't get so worked up about things. While I look small, I am actually pretty mighty, and nothing like my father, but I am also not a saint. Give me time, and I might even figure out a way to fix our problem. I am a Master Craftsman after all!" I laughed, but she shook her head.
Fantasy · Magic_
The 5 year time skip after his awakening
I was 35 on the inside, or something, but I was also in an 8 year old body, and there was no getting around how nervous I was. That damn princess was glaring daggers into me so hard that I could almost feel my soul being cut away as I got closer!
Fantasy · Magic_
Can you edit the first few chapters so his age clear
ch 0 8 Harmony's Gambit
Fantasy · Magic_
He's 13
"I am like eight, so don't get so worked up about things. While I look small, I am actually pretty mighty, and nothing like my father, but I am also not a saint. Give me time, and I might even figure out a way to fix our problem. I am a Master Craftsman after all!" I laughed, but she shook her head.
Fantasy · Magic_
To be honest I don't remember, it was a year ago
With how high his MP is and the [Enchanting] magic, he could probably clear E quests alone, but sadly he isn't allowed to take them.
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor