Dude I’m enjoying it so far but the relationship stuff is getting boring at this point just pull the trigger on a haram or set him up with someone. To have a hundred chapters of relationship building for mc to turn around and say he ain’t interested in a relationship is pretty weak
ch 116 Chapter 116: Popular girl street cred (4- Final)
TV · Alittlepiggy33
Every good barber has a 911, don’t know why but it seems to be a thing
"How about we go with the Porsche 911 Turbo S for the car? It's a true icon, delivering both power and elegance. And for the motorcycle, the Ducati Panigale V4 R would be a fantastic choice. It's a high-performance sportbike that will give you an adrenaline rush every time you hit the throttle."
Others · John_Len_2493
+1 stick to what you have and expand from here. It’s good so far don ’t make to much work for yourself.
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throuple then, The real world is a strange place and what are you going to do completely change the story and throw missy in sooner or maybe have pennyxoc and later they pull missy in to spice thing up a little. Dude if open relationships are a thing why not this. Also you just spend most of a chapter explaining there sexcapades then had penny uncomfortable on what was basically a forced date with Lenord. The story has already started to go in the pennyxoc direction. Do you really want to try reshape what’s already there to basically do a ocxoc fanfic in big bang theory.
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Dude if people want to read it but you thinks it’ too cringy, either do something else or rewrite it to be less cringey, you are a different person to when you started this don’t force yourself to be that person for people on the internet.
ch 15 Goodbye
TV · Darpan_Biswas
Enjoying it so far but would appreciate if you tried up the pace a bit at leas until they move to forks. Also cool idea would be Jin more cobra Kai.
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When I go home I ring the bell, saves me looking for my keys
The bell rang and Akito went to open it.
Anime & Comics · Xertz
Please tell me this is coming back now we got season 4
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TV · Monkey_Godking
So his name is John Nathan Jennifer
"Nathan is like mom. Overprotective." Nate comment, being in third. He slowed down significantly to not leave his little sister alone.
Anime & Comics · Blur182
Don’t Over think it. Continue or stop if you want but remember this is your story and at this point nothing past season 1 has hapenned and doesn’t Have to if you don’t Want it to 😊
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TV · Enigma_Green
What were you smoking when you wrote this!!!!, nearly peed myself.
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Anime & Comics · Smithsonian86_
Love the aggression and the Story. haters gonna hate!
Just wait till he gets Lydia, HAHAHAHAHA. She'll be special too since she's already supernatural plus getting Adrian's gift she'll be a Tribrid! Can't wait for the tears from the crybabies to flow for that!)
TV · lawless_last6969
Nothing tastes as good as local food🤨
"I'll have some local food and orange juice, please," she said.
TV · YerzhanTurbekov
Interesting concept but if you’re going for spirit of vengeance don’t make the dude so wimpy. He has been attacked multiple times now with no response other then anger at being murdered. Get him standing up for himself pretty quickly or this will get boring fast.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: School & Consequences
I Will Have Vengeance (Modern Family x MCU)
TV · GAF_00_TW