This is the second time that he has this realization
When he was a system, he had watched Altren and Jake get it on so many times. 'That means Jake… he might be a super! What are his powers?! I have watched them all their love life and I have never seen him display any powers,'
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Nope, in the early chapters you said he was even more handsome than this body.
They did have similar eyes but his original face looked very normal.
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
There is a tiny problem: previously you said that Aaron was disillused in his late thirties, while Altren is college student, so they should be at least 15 years apart.
Aaron grew up with Altren as siblings. They played together and even learned to use their powers together.
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
So he is a middle aged man (in his early forties) and fell in love for someone in his early twenties.
"Why did you appear now? Now that I have given up on you, my destiny," he gulped down the drink and left without a word.
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Devil and demon are being used in a interchangable way.
He helped me become a supreme demon.
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
An adventurer and supreme mage that end up blocked by fear?
....fear had already taken over me.
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
Could you make an universal power rankig ? It is becoming more and more confusing.
1. Power levels between devils and humans are as follows:
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
Is there any need to say the name everytime?
I closed my eyes then said'[Absolute Concentration mana circuit:God's eyes]' and slowly opened my eyes
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
If you read SLR you will never able to look at tge name Laplace in the same way.
"It's all for the glory of Laplace", said person B
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
Please stop, having it narrated this way is cringe af.
Chase muttered'[Aura arts:Flash steps],
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
The punctuation is wrong.
In short, we live in, Sun Kingdom, one of the three kingdoms of humanity along with the Kingdom of Magic;Skapia and the Kingdom of Knights;Kostan.
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
Honestly would it be possible to cut on the use of the word "talent"?
"It's fine, it is the responsibility of us instructors to guide the young talented buds to grow into a big tree that provides shade to everyone", says one of the instructors.
Fantasy · Ethel_Imaginations
The big problem about who come first, the egg or the chicken? To grow strong one needs a growth tecnique, but the weak are not able to meke their own tecnique.
ch 52 Chapter 52: The Unknown Spirit Form Problems (2)
Fantasy · AngelOfSadness
OMG who would have ever thought that the dark seed on his chest was the source of his dark power? Only a genius would be able to recognize such a tiny detail!
The Head of the Punishment Committee was impressed by Jin's cunning and how he could spot Singh's weakness and defeat him so easily. He let out a small sigh as he muttered.
Fantasy · AngelOfSadness
Most important: "Why does she think that he even knows?"
'Where is he going to run from me? After months there will be an entrance exam to the academy, and he will come back here to participate in it.'
Fantasy · AngelOfSadness
Hey, respect your teacher! Seriously, why does he talks to her in this way? It doesn't make sense and weaken the immersion.
[ "Well, I don't want to end up single like you when I grow up."]
Fantasy · SomDxD
To the author: using too much superlative will cause only inconsistences.
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Fantasy · SomDxD
So hiro is the first to achieve E+ at around 15 yo while she achieved A at 20 yo. It feels a bit strange that she went from E to A in around 4 years.
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Fantasy · SomDxD
Will he be the mc's hubby?
Anyways, with his cold demeanor, I don't think any normal student would approach him. He gives off an aura that seems to look down on other people. He has red hair combined with his red eye which makes him look wild and dangerous.
Fantasy · SomDxD
Weren't all super immune to guns?
Aaron hurriedly garbed him and pulled him down to the dock. He placed his body on him, shielding him from any danger.
The Rogue System [BL]
LGBT+ · Lullabybao