KingLettuce

The mf is overpowered from the beginning but I don’t really mind that. As far as the plot goes it kind of follows the show with variations, but either way I haven’t seen many 100 fanfics so I ain’t mad about that. If you don’t mind either of those two things the story itself has decently long chapters and good grammar. Keep up the good work Author!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Although the grammar is a little off in some parts here or there, overall it is pretty easy to understand and enjoy the story. As far as the story goes, I like how it combines things from different shows/media. But the one thing I was a little unsure of is how the mc’s power works. But other than that the translation is good and I definitely recommend to give this one a read. ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Surprisingly funny, the chapters are good length and the grammar is good as well. Some sections of the story are copies of the show, but somehow it doesn’t feel as bad as it does in other stories I have read. I can only hope that the story keeps its quality in the future. Keep up the good work Author!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

The story which is about house of the dragons, is decent with not too many issues. The way the pov jumps from chapter to chapter or all in the same chapter can be a little confusing but you can still get the point. The grammar is mostly good with some little issues here or there but you can still understand what was meant to be said. Chapter length is a little short for my tastes but with how often the story is updated it doesn’t really matter much. Overall the story is pretty decent and the progression is paced pretty good. Keep up the good work Author!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Very interesting concept and I already like the first 3 chapters, no issues with either grammar or chapter length. Overall very enjoyable to read, hopefully it stays this quality in the future. Keep up the good work Author!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Surprisingly entertaining, it is a classic fantasy story that has good chapter length and good grammar. Nothing much at all to complain about, can’t wait to read more 👍 ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

A little slow plot wise for my taste but overall very enjoyable and easy to binge read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

So far so good, it seems to be developing nicely as a story. I am interested to see what direction it will go in the future, and as of now I have no complaints about the story. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Pretty good story with good grammar and some fast pacing. Although the pacing is fast I have to say I don’t mind it for this story since for these kinds of stories I want to get to the action faster. That being said the plot is somewhat simple, but needs more chapters for it to really be fleshed out. Overall this story is a good read, keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

Fanfic has decent grammar with few mistakes here and there with improvements in later chapters, even with the mistakes it is still easy to understand. There are a lot of time skips and it certainly feels a bit rushed, but overall I enjoy it just fine even with its little mistakes. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………