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Tsunade mainly, I want to see how you will make it make sense and of all the female characters she is the best and she relates a lot to Sasuke, loss of family and that, Hinata (she is the classic excuse, she has too much potential) just don't make her unbearably shy or Naruko , which did not happen in the original because Naruto is a man, although if you use her, she should not be stupid like the original, anyone is fine, not Sakura, the supposed love they have for each other is disgusting

It's a Chinese translation, right?, that part about big brother and three generations of Spider-Mans

I'll leave it, good luck, I hate systems, especially annoying ones like this one.

I like your story, some chapters feel a little boring, but I like your idea, I could use Emiya's steps for projection, unlocking a new branch for his technique, it seems to me that it doesn't take advantage of my meta-knowledge, I feel that the logical thing would be try anything that gives you power, for example the speed force equation, it is in a fictional world, because another like dc could not exist, just a thought

Wow, I hate Eina so bad

Trash

I hate his sister, it's unbearable

I like Pamela, but I have to admit that I would like a supergirl, it would be fun and would keep him connected to the league, very good story, keep it up

It could be like that, personally I don't think so, but considering that he can still use infinity, when things touch in reality they don't, the atoms don't do it and since the sixeyes could control the energy at that level he can create an infinity barrier of that size

Naruto defended himself against Amaterazu with a layer of chakra, and he also thought about how Jogo didn't do anything to him, that means that the heat doesn't reach Gojo, so it wouldn't do anything to him.

Could you do something, Mikami the Ghostbusters was a pretty old anime that would fit perfectly.

I like it a lot, thanks for the chapter, maybe for his chakra problem he can use some things from the movies, like the helel stone (I think that's its name), there is an armor that absorbs vitality, I think it would be fun to send the mc to these missions, plus they would help him a lot, another thing would be to give him a wind nature and omit the sukuna technique, using the cutting property he has, that added to his shadows would be a good combination, good luck and I wish you the best

Megumi's mother's last name is fushiguro, it is the name that Toji adopted, I don't know if the author doesn't care or didn't read these details, maybe it's because it is an AU, there is a lot that doesn't make sense, the chapters are every time heavier, there is very little information, honestly it is increasingly annoying

So much hope for nothing, why not give him the ten shadows technique like this, change it a little with the interaction of the chakra, such as reviving shikigami, being able to function them at will (mahoraga with the rabbit and allowing them to multiply and adapt) or being able to use the same His powers, not only do you nerf him, but you nerf the character, he has 200 IQ for God's sake and the worst of all is Mahoraga, trying to tame him is the most entertaining part, what crazy idea does the MC come up with to do it, I hope he improves , because everything so far is disappointing

I could talk to Tsunade and tell him that he is going to go with Orochimaru, learn from him and then kill him, pretend that he is a traitor and thus also motivate others, I say it could be an option

The eye ability could be those of MHA's new order quirk, I think he can only give two orders at most (you could change that, maybe the more the more orders he can use), a useful order would be that the MS cannot be blinded or that his eyes do not deteriorate (you could make an order for him to evolve without another MS but I think it would be boring), so for the moment whenever he uses MS he must use that order and the other one he can use to train, for example, my ability to learning to multiply by 10 or my body is capable of healing itself or it can absorb natural energy without consequences, the possibilities are endless

How many stones do you have to reach for you to upload another chapter?

I feel that you are dragging on unnecessarily, the interactions and dialogues between characters have to improve (there are times when I don't know who is speaking, it is a little confusing), the thoughts and internal reflections seem very good to me, I think you understood Toji very well, but I think that Zoro lacks a little maturity and seriousness that characterizes him, the fic is very good so far, I'm not saying that to bother, just an observation that can help, thank you and keep it up

Boring, sooooooo boring