Deadline_423

1d

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Alot of the words are getting mushed together.

ch 17 | 017 | A Greedy One's Call for Help

Naval Gacha System: It's Time To Monopolize The Seven Seas!

Fantasy · Mister_Archon

Deadline_423

10mth

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Do you mesn you walked to your room

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Marvel: I am Scarlet Witch.

Anime & Comics · Elizabeth_Olsen34

Deadline_423

11mth

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The thing I don agree with is the pay wall becsuse the world may be somewhat concept but the games his charac make aren’t. Therefore I believe for there to be an actual paywall then it should be complety orginal, games and all.

GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

Games · NunuXD

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

Need to space out some words, some of them are merged together.

ch 0 1 Chapter 7 : Traveler

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Movies · Darkest_Sage

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

Such a way with words you have. A being that goes down the path of darkness but differently.

ch 0 1 Prologue

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Movies · Darkest_Sage

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 0 1 Chapter 3: Awakening

The Legendary Beast Master (Dropped)

Anime & Comics · Abyss_123

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

That actually seems like a good game idea.

ch 0 -1 Star Wars Genesis Game notes

Star Wars: Sarith (AU)

Movies · DigitalSignal

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

The first chapter confused me and this is before me reading the rest. you should pick a gender and stick with it because it get's very confusing. You keep changing the word he and she so it was very confusing.

ch 0 2 Free Will

Terra Rising

War · PanzerWaffles

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

Read a little a bit and it reminds me of Building The Ultimate Fantasy for some reason. So I wanted to know fi this was going to be similar.

ch 0 1 a new start

In a Cultivation world with a world conquering system

Anime & Comics · Itachi101

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

Just wanted to say thanks to Scott47 for putting in all of the pics to help jog my memory of these characters.

ch 0 1 Chapter Two: The Emperor's First Orders in the New World

The Soul Reaping Overlord (Overlord X Bleach)

Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

+1

Yes

GOT: Bjorn The King Beyond The Wall

TV · Thrust

Deadline_423

1yr

Commented

I think we already read this. I will be waiting when a new chapter comes out.

ch 20 Akiva

Star Wars: The Son of Tarkin

Movies · Gs9Gosohard

Deadline_423

2yr

Replied to I_LOVE_MEGUMIN

I will have to disagree with you, my fellow star wars fan. I'll say it's not entirely impossible to have balance in the force. It may be just more of a struggle between two sides. The two sides the light and the Darkside constantly clash with one another.

"I am balance!" William muttered in a deathly tone, as he increased the power of his force judgement .

Star Wars: The Son of Tarkin

Movies · Gs9Gosohard

Deadline_423

2yr

Commented

Option Two

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OverLord: Guild Wars

Anime & Comics · Holo_Lover

Deadline_423

2yr

Commented

Not going to lie but now I'm less intrested in this fan fic because of the fact that he is human. and from reading the comments for the human vote they want him to be a anti hero and make an org. that defeats the purpose of the ceph. I will start reading once he fully matures since the first five chapters he is going to be young. Until then peace.