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This is one of my favourite stories. I love the fact that the main character is a woman and how it shows her character development. she has really good fighting skills and doesn't need any man to save her or come to her rescue!

I enjoyed reading this story so much. I just hope that the author will start updating again soon, I want to know what will happen next! I highly recommend reading this author's books!

at the beginning I was very interested in this book but the more I read the more i realised that a lot of the parts are exactly the same as in chouka kou, and I felt a bit disappointed. Even though in the description it said that it was inspired by chouka kou. reading the exact same story isn't really interesting and made me very disappointed that the author didn't even bother changing some things in the scenes.

the first few 100 chapters of the story are really thought out, but as the story progresses the writing becomes more clumsy and loses a bit of it's plot and storyline. it seems like the author has a lot of great ideas for the book and the desire to implement these ideas in the story made the author lose track of the storyline itself as the story seems to wonder off track quite a bit. Yet, it was still entertaining to read to some degree, however with some editing this book will definitely be able to become even a better story.