I'm liking the story, but having thena as a love interest is weird for me. Mainly because you said she looks like Angelina jolie, who is 47 in the real world and imo looks like a banshee.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: The Adventures of Pluto and Thena, 4250 – 3900 BCE (1)
Movies · mark_kiple
Fake this fake that geez. Another edgy sociopathic mc from yours truly
ch 0 4 Academy Time part 2
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
Still don't like that Tsunade is a harem member. Never really liked her as a character and even though age doesn't really matter in this fic it's still weird that she's like 15 years older than them. Don't even get me started on mei... Borderline pedophile and basically grooming. Disgusting
ch 90 Ch90. War starting and talking business.
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
Why exactly is a normal dude who had a family acting like a psychopath???
ch 24 Chapter 24: Egg
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
What exactly would he do if someone actually believes his "past life story" and kidnaps him???
ch 52 Winterhold Dilemma
Video Games · El_Don
Ugh liking cats and liking khajits are two different things. One is normal and one is a disgusting furry that should be burned at the stake.
ch 17 A Good Bath, A Good Fight
Video Games · El_Don
When did Asuma have siblings?
ch 44 Chapter 44: Déjà vu
Anime & Comics · Crystal_Cat
How does mei hold one of his hands while his arms are folded? Yeah it's possible but physically awkward.
ch 41 Chapter 41: Interruption
Anime & Comics · Crystal_Cat
This Luna is adorable
ch 48 Setting Up Office, Lovegood, Return To The Icy Vault
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
I ship the potter princess with mc, no particularly reason.
ch 40 Spreading Influence, and Important Customers
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
The saying is "you gotta risk it for the biscuit"... Not "no risk it no biscuit"...
ch 37 Blood Magic, and Successful Entry
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
I'm surprised aedan didn't mention he would probably be dead if not for Harry. The baby hp vanquishing voldy event is what got him out of that dungeon.
ch 62 Ch. 62 Chats for the Summer
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey